She wants something U can't give her

All night, U try and kiss her
Holder her till she's drowning
And when U finally make your entrance
She gets all cold, pushes U away
And close
Why?
She wants something U can't give her

Everytime U're out to have a drink
She's talking, joking and dancing just with U
But when U get her home and down
It's no more fun, she hides
U can't come
Don't U know?
She wants something U can't give her

One day when U see it's time
U catch her and lay beside U
She shuts her eyes closely and her lips
Shiver, before tears find their way out
Love
Do U see?
She wants love and U can't give it 2 her


By IM, 03, Radvilishkis.


Please rate or tell me if this could make a song..?

You know I could make it a ballad. I knew it was love all along when I seen the last couple lines. I really like it, and I could turn it into a nice slow jam.


Peace,
JD

Nice 1 sweety. Sorry I havn't replyed 4 a while but I'm still having CPU trouble. I'll catch up w/ U asap. Love U lots.

PS. good 2 have u back!

JDODSON said:

That sounds very tempting, JD. I guess I could give it over to U, of course...

I will begin work on it next week, HRB. Thanks! I will make it sound as good as it can for what I have.


Peace,
JD

JDODSON said:

Thanx to U!
I want the Copyrights, though...! LOL
Send it to my mail once U're finished

That's cool- just give me credit for the vocals and music.

I'll list it like this.


Copyright 2003, IM, Radvilishkis.
Written by IM, Radvilishkis, Music by Jason Dodson, Performed by Jason Dodson. Jason Dodson's work Copyright 2003, JMD, Inc.


Peace,
JD

JDODSON said:

Cool,
Just make it like this:

copyright 2003, Ieva Mikelyte
Written by Ieva Mikelyte, Music by JD etc.

Radvilishkis is the place where it was written.

Thanx again!