programmer said:

sparse and dry. it's a rough demo with great potential, but, it lacks the commitment (oddities) of an Art Of Noise type empty jam, it sounds like just 4 or 5 different ideas strung together via midi.

GOOD but COULD BE great.

Your name fits the track.

I agree with Otan. It would be fit for an Art of Noise type thing. It needs a hook, something repeated more. Its too short, too condensed. It needs to be longer and more spread out, with certain themes repeated so that the listener has a chance to relate to everything going on in the song.

On your site:

I like the guitar on "air" and the keyboard sounds. It would be nice to hear a full version.

"Bone" has some cool guitar stuff going on. Are you playing?

"Coconut Water" sounds cool too. Again, I would like to hear at least one track all the way through.

Thanks for linking me! I'm gonna hook you up on my site too right now.

Peace.

I like it. I would like it more if the keys and some of the noise elements were a little more in front (of the drums).

Funk really has a million faces.

I dig it. I could do without that little 1-note-repeated synth hook but apart from that I like it...

Sounds kind of like INXS, only funkier.