Author | Message |
New tune Got a new tune on my site called "Free Your Mind"...More of an R&B feel. Feel free to check it out...Thankyou.
www.mp3.com/markgrimshaw | |
- E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
Mark - you've got some SERIOUS vocals. MAN this is good.
in my opinion (always gotta put that in there) Your music is doing your vocals a disservice. Go listen to Marvin Gaye's What's Goin On, or Stevie, or, uhh, early 70's Sly (like there's ANYTHING other era of Sly). Your music is light-adult-contemporary, slick keyboard driven stuff. I would LOVE this song if it was more rough, more, I dunno, more LIVE, less computerized. Your vocals are SOOO powerful - remind me of St. Paul's first solo tape (yeah, I don't think it MADE it to CD). The song - your vocal delivery - is powerful, especially the chorus, and you're melting it down with the syrupy drum/synth patch... I'm almost wanting a INXS power chord hit in there... This is one of those songs where, if you were willing, I bet some folks in here could put some SERIOUS spins on it as a remix effort. I'd LOVE to try, and I don't even know how! ALL THAT SAID, I think it's great... it just sounds like a lite-remix or sumpm... The Last Otan Track: www.funkmusician.com/what.mp3 | |
- E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
otan said: Mark - you've got some SERIOUS vocals. MAN this is good.
in my opinion (always gotta put that in there) Your music is doing your vocals a disservice. Go listen to Marvin Gaye's What's Goin On, or Stevie, or, uhh, early 70's Sly (like there's ANYTHING other era of Sly). Your music is light-adult-contemporary, slick keyboard driven stuff. I would LOVE this song if it was more rough, more, I dunno, more LIVE, less computerized. Your vocals are SOOO powerful - remind me of St. Paul's first solo tape (yeah, I don't think it MADE it to CD). The song - your vocal delivery - is powerful, especially the chorus, and you're melting it down with the syrupy drum/synth patch... I'm almost wanting a INXS power chord hit in there... This is one of those songs where, if you were willing, I bet some folks in here could put some SERIOUS spins on it as a remix effort. I'd LOVE to try, and I don't even know how! ALL THAT SAID, I think it's great... it just sounds like a lite-remix or sumpm... Thankyou very much Otan. I absolutely agree. I'm doing it with my band now, and it sounds alot different live, which is a good thing. I'm going to take your advice and re-record it. Peace...Mark | |
- E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
sensitivemthrfker said: Thankyou very much Otan. I absolutely agree. I'm doing it with my band now, and it sounds alot different live, which is a good thing. I'm going to take your advice and re-record it. Peace...Mark
Can't wait to hear it. I really like this tune. The Last Otan Track: www.funkmusician.com/what.mp3 | |
- E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
otan said: sensitivemthrfker said: Thankyou very much Otan. I absolutely agree. I'm doing it with my band now, and it sounds alot different live, which is a good thing. I'm going to take your advice and re-record it. Peace...Mark
Can't wait to hear it. I really like this tune. Thanks man...M | |
- E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |