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Thread started 11/12/16 5:50pm

ZombieKitten

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A song I made

I wrote and produced this song. My husband mixed and mastered and I made the cover art.

I'm very proud to show you! The singer is one of my best friends in the world. She is amazing worship

I hope you like it heart

I'm the mistake you wanna make
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Reply #1 posted 11/14/16 2:48pm

FragileUnderto
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Thats actually pretty nice cool

Cant believe my purple psychedelic pimp slap pimp2

And I descend from grace, In arms of undertow
I will take my place, In the great below
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Reply #2 posted 11/14/16 9:51pm

ZombieKitten

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FragileUndertow said:

Thats actually pretty nice cool

thank you biggrin

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Reply #3 posted 11/16/16 1:00pm

Slave2daGroove

Really impressive production and song.

Nice work!

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Reply #4 posted 11/17/16 10:21am

mltijchr

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ZK this song is in fact.. quite good..!

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what genre would you put this song in - if any?

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production-wise - how long did it take you to write this song?

how long did take to record/produce?

will you release it for "public consumption" or just for family & friends?

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will you post the lyrics here?

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again - nice work on this music.

your friend - she can sing.. & her voice fits well with this song.

I'll see you tonight..
in ALL MY DREAMS..
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Reply #5 posted 11/17/16 9:29pm

ZombieKitten

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Slave2daGroove said:

Really impressive production and song.

Nice work!

clapping

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Reply #6 posted 11/17/16 9:36pm

ZombieKitten

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mltijchr said:

ZK this song is in fact.. quite good..!

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what genre would you put this song in - if any?

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production-wise - how long did it take you to write this song?

how long did take to record/produce?

will you release it for "public consumption" or just for family & friends?

.

will you post the lyrics here?

.

again - nice work on this music.

your friend - she can sing.. & her voice fits well with this song.

I wrote the song itself in an afternoon on a borrowed keyboard whilst on holiday, then it was put on the shelf for a few months. I put together a demo for another song and realised this one fit better.

From start to finish it was a 9 month process. All whilst also working on other material with other artists too. Hard to add up actual hours lol

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it's out there already: http://smarturl.it/VIWK

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I Wanna Know lyrics

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Verse 1
I’ve been around, enough to know
That guys like you can't be alone
You need someone
To keep you warm
But I'm not gonna be that body

You call me up, most every night
Begging me to hold you tight
And then you don't show
Believe me I know
You're just a waste of my time

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And your sweet nothings
Don’t mean a thing if you won't be mine
And no amount of wishful thinking
Will change the way I feel tonight

Chorus
I wanna know
I wanna know
If you want me, say so
But if you don’t, let me go

You are the king of sending mixed signals
I am the queen of having second thoughts
I wanna know
I wanna know
I wanna know for sure

Verse 2
In some ways I'm just like you
I'll do things just to get me through
The difference is
That I still wish
You feel the same way I do

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genre I don't know, maybe pop/RnB?

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Reply #7 posted 11/17/16 11:00pm

mltijchr

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good lyrics too.

they confirm how well thought-out this whole project is.

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my favorite lines in the song are:

"You are the king of sending mixed signals
I am the queen of having second thoughts"

that sums up the dynamics of many people's relationships.

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the 1 line I don't get is:

"And no amount of wishful thinking
Will change the way I feel tonight"

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HOW is she supposed to feel tonight

regardless/in spite of the "wishful thinking"??

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normally I am not in this forum.. but..

brace yourself - I am probably going to put something here to

looking for some useful feedback.

so it does make sense that before I take some

I ought to dish out a little too..!

I'll see you tonight..
in ALL MY DREAMS..
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Reply #8 posted 11/18/16 4:03am

ZombieKitten

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mltijchr said:

good lyrics too.


they confirm how well thought-out this whole project is.


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my favorite lines in the song are:


"You are the king of sending mixed signals
I am the queen of having second thoughts"


that sums up the dynamics of many people's relationships.


.


the 1 line I don't get is:


"And no amount of wishful thinking
Will change the way I feel tonight"


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HOW is she supposed to feel tonight


regardless/in spite of the "wishful thinking"??


.


.


normally I am not in this forum.. but..


brace yourself - I am probably going to put something here to


looking for some useful feedback.


so it does make sense that before I take some


I ought to dish out a little too..!




Basically it's the overanalysing that's the problem
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She wishes she didn't care so much; that she could just have sex casually and not get so attached and keep reading into it that maybe he cares for her - and that she thinks she needs to kick him to the curb once and for all, but she wants him even though she hates herself the next day for breaking her own rules. It's complicated! (I've had this exact relationship and it was horrible)
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Looking forwards to hearing your work!
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Reply #9 posted 11/22/16 10:10pm

mltijchr

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I bookmarked this song. is your friend a professional singer?

I'll see you tonight..
in ALL MY DREAMS..
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Reply #10 posted 11/29/16 9:20pm

ZombieKitten

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mltijchr said:

I bookmarked this song. is your friend a professional singer?


Yes. She was signed to a major label before. Now signed to my label!
I'm the mistake you wanna make
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Reply #11 posted 12/02/16 6:33pm

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ZombieKitten said:

mltijchr said:

I bookmarked this song. is your friend a professional singer?

Yes. She was signed to a major label before. Now signed to my label!

Singer is great and fits your type of production! I enjoyed this.

LOVE FACTORY PRODUCTIONS
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Reply #12 posted 12/07/16 1:42am

heartbeatocean

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YOU ROCK!!!

horns

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Reply #13 posted 12/07/16 8:26pm

ZombieKitten

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heartbeatocean said:

YOU ROCK!!!

horns

cool as do you! worship

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