Listen to my slow jam type of song. I'm in a creative process, and I would be thankful for some honest but constructive critisism. I'll start out saying that I'm Norwegian, and I'm working on my english also . But I think you will enjoy this anyways. I'ts great for listening with a headset.

https://soundcloud.com/nj...ideascetch

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Fixed it now. I was planning to have it up just for a little while, as I'm going to make it a whole song, as well as re recording background vocals, lead and add new lyrics instruments etc... I'm a Norwegian, so I have to make the lyrics sound right also, as english grammar articulation etc is something I probably need to work on. I really would love to hear some constructive critisism on this one, as you can help me do the right adjustments to the song

not that bad, kind of cute how your voice steps through the song. Maybe you can tighten up the choruses a bit, make them a bit more powerful & intense. But that's my personal perceiving.

Apart from that I really like the groove of "Jam With You"!

CityPhantom said:

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CityPhantom said:

not that bad, kind of cute how your voice steps through the song. Maybe you can tighten up the choruses a bit, make them a bit more powerful & intense. But that's my personal perceiving.

Apart from that I really like the groove of "Jam With You"!

Thank you for an honest feedback. I appreciate that, and will keep that in mind for my next recording session. Of course I have my own opinions, but this helps me get a greater view and perspective on how it sounds to others. I have little experience live, and are in the making of a band were I'm likely to be the front singer, and have a lead role in composing and writing the music.

Of course, I wish you Good Luck forming a band. Maybe you can ask Maya Vik or Jarle Bernhoft to come over? LOL! No, honestly, the world needs new music. We are in need of some serious new Funk! This said, all the best to you and please keep us posted.