Would love to know your thoughts x

EDIT - DailyMotion link for anyone that can't view YouTube - http://www.dailymotion.co...dNjH_k3t2A

[Edited 7/2/13 16:33pm]

I love the song and the energy that you bring with it. The video is better then most but I have a few thoughts.

Just honest in critiquing the video I would say;

- Love the jump cuts, it helped balance out the slow motion shots. Less of the swami cam in the beginning and just use it for the effects, that was cool.

- I'd lose half of the shots googling swami music, they didn't help anything. If you want people to know who it is, then put your logo in or end it with a web site or put it at the beginning like an old MTV video

- I need more people dancing, this is dance music! You use the same people dancing shots on more then one occassion, should only see each shot once.

- When you make the focus 3 people dancing to their own music, you lose the audience. If you're not going to have something to look at (women, cars, beautiful landscapes, space trips, whatever) then you need to have people enjoying your music. People identify with other people but you have to have a variety of shots all having a good time.

Hope this helps!

It's just my

Slave2daGroove said:

I love the song and the energy that you bring with it. The video is better then most but I have a few thoughts.

Just honest in critiquing the video I would say;

- Love the jump cuts, it helped balance out the slow motion shots. Less of the swami cam in the beginning and just use it for the effects, that was cool.

- I'd lose half of the shots googling swami music, they didn't help anything. If you want people to know who it is, then put your logo in or end it with a web site or put it at the beginning like an old MTV video

- I need more people dancing, this is dance music! You use the same people dancing shots on more then one occassion, should only see each shot once.

- When you make the focus 3 people dancing to their own music, you lose the audience. If you're not going to have something to look at (women, cars, beautiful landscapes, space trips, whatever) then you need to have people enjoying your music. People identify with other people but you have to have a variety of shots all having a good time.

Hope this helps!

It's just my

Thank you so much for your feedback! We shot, edited and directed this video ourself, so I'm glad your overall vibe was positive. For the next video, we are stepping it up a notch with location shots, audiences, models, etc.

love, love the vid

luv4u said:

love, love the vid

Thank you luv4u!

Edit - and thanks for the sticky

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For some reason I can´t watch it on Youtube. I ´ve tried Proxtube in order to unlock it but to no avail. Could you please provide a Dailymotion link?

By the way, let me know if you need a reasonably priced production team. Some friends of mine are very good at making professional promo clips. But let me see your video first. So please provide a different link.