"Suitcase Loving" (an older song)

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Thread started 06/22/12 4:59am

Dave1992

"Suitcase Loving" (an older song)

Thought I'd share this older song of mine. Felt a little sad and lost today, so I digged it out again.

Listening to it now, the piano is a bit too quiet for my taste (although I remember wanting the listener to closely listen out for the little harmony changes in the background).

Please, do tell me what you think about it.

Suitcase loving
no more feeling
Go
-Stay
Never
-Today
Suitcase loving
No more struggling
Leave
-Stay
I gave up
-Pray
Life is short
I'll resort
to my safest suitcase love
Suitcase loving
No more talking
Shhh...
-Cry
No
-Don't lie
Suitcase loving
Endless travelling
Go
-Cry
On my own
-You're mine
Packed my case
Showed my face
Found a better place to stay

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Reply #1 posted 06/30/12 5:03pm

smoothcriminal 12	This is great.
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Reply #2 posted 07/01/12 7:00am

Dave1992

Someone actually listened to it?! eek

lol

Thanks, man!