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Thread started 05/11/12 9:48am

cav

poetry

Hi if you like poetry please check out my friends blog, he is a massive Prince fan!

http://www.oiramonillavac.com

Thank you!

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Reply #1 posted 05/15/12 1:16pm

Billmenever

Your words come to life as your heart influences your mind. Thanks for sharing. I now have another delightful poetry site to enjoy.

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Reply #2 posted 05/17/12 4:32am

cav

Billmenever said:

Your words come to life as your heart influences your mind. Thanks for sharing. I now have another delightful poetry site to enjoy.

Thank you for your kind words. More poems coming soon.
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Reply #3 posted 05/18/12 9:34am

cav

Torture

You make me dance alone in your spotlight
I feel naked with all my emotions on show
This feeling of love I can not seem to fight
No need to tell you 'cos you already know
A wry smile cuts across your beautiful face
As you watch me struggle with my tortured heart
Like the cat and the mouse it's all in the chase
You have me trapped never will we be apart

www.oiramonillavac.com

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Reply #4 posted 05/22/12 5:11am

Billmenever

cav said:

Torture



You make me dance alone in your spotlight
I feel naked with all my emotions on show
This feeling of love I can not seem to fight
No need to tell you 'cos you already know
A wry smile cuts across your beautiful face
As you watch me struggle with my tortured heart
Like the cat and the mouse it's all in the chase
You have me trapped never will we be apart




www.oiramonillavac.com


Yess.
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Reply #5 posted 05/25/12 3:04am

cav

I Am Not Perfect

I am not perfect in any way
Maybe that's why you didn't stay
I make stupid mistakes all the time its true
But one I didn't make was falling in love with you

Sometimes I shout when I should listen
I should have respected your position
I act before I have time to think
Sometimes I eat when I should drink

I'm not asking or begging for too much
Just want the chance to feel your touch
Then I'll become the man you can trust
Because loving you baby for me is a must

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Reply #6 posted 05/25/12 2:16pm

namaste2u

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Your friend has written such beautiful beautiful poems from the soul Cav... clapping nod dove dove dove rose cool

Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not go out and look for a successful personality and duplicate it.”
― Bruce Lee
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Reply #7 posted 05/26/12 2:02am

cav

namaste2u said:

Your friend has written such beautiful beautiful poems from the soul Cav... clapping nod dove dove dove rose cool

Thank you. To be honest they are mine, I was a bit embarrased at first! neutral

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Reply #8 posted 06/01/12 1:29am

cav

In My Mind

I can only love you in my mind
It is easier for my heart I find
Because in my arms you are not
My world is so cold and not hot
Just want a mirror that shows your face
Then joy in my soul would take its place
I pretend you are here and then I find
I can only love you in my mind

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Reply #9 posted 06/10/12 5:54am

getUpanDance

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cav said:

namaste2u said:

Your friend has written such beautiful beautiful poems from the soul Cav... clapping nod dove dove dove rose cool

Thank you. To be honest they are mine, I was a bit embarrased at first! neutral

Don't be embarrased, they are beautiful poems... mushy

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Reply #10 posted 06/10/12 9:41pm

roseypink56

Very nice. smile.

There was an org collaboration that was gonna happen a while back but not sure what happened there. I was thinking if people want to start it over or we could do a photography/poetry book with photography orgers showcasing their work and we org poets/writers can write poems to them...what does everyone think?

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Reply #11 posted 06/15/12 8:02am

cav

getUpanDance said:

cav said:

Thank you. To be honest they are mine, I was a bit embarrased at first! neutral

Don't be embarrased, they are beautiful poems... mushy

Thank you so much! biggrin

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Reply #12 posted 06/15/12 8:03am

cav

roseypink56 said:

Very nice. smile.

There was an org collaboration that was gonna happen a while back but not sure what happened there. I was thinking if people want to start it over or we could do a photography/poetry book with photography orgers showcasing their work and we org poets/writers can write poems to them...what does everyone think?

I will be up for that. lol

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Reply #13 posted 06/17/12 6:29am

roseypink56

cav said:

roseypink56 said:

Very nice. smile.

There was an org collaboration that was gonna happen a while back but not sure what happened there. I was thinking if people want to start it over or we could do a photography/poetry book with photography orgers showcasing their work and we org poets/writers can write poems to them...what does everyone think?

I will be up for that. lol

Why the lol? I think it would be cool and maybe even put it as a sticky to see how much attention it gets.

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Reply #14 posted 06/17/12 8:20am

cav

roseypink56 said:

cav said:

I will be up for that. lol

Why the lol? I think it would be cool and maybe even put it as a sticky to see how much attention it gets.

Sorry, just thought it was a happy face!

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Reply #15 posted 06/18/12 4:43am

roseypink56

cav said:

roseypink56 said:

Why the lol? I think it would be cool and maybe even put it as a sticky to see how much attention it gets.

Sorry, just thought it was a happy face!

Ah ok, all good smile.

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Reply #16 posted 06/19/12 2:29am

cav

A Lonely Old Man

I don't know why I sit here and just write
Have I just given up and lost my drive and fight
So frustrated and so angry with me and myself
All this loneliness can't be good for my health
I seem to be happy when I am alone and sad
Sometimes I feel I'm just going crazy going mad
Am I alone with all the crazy thoughts in my head
You will die a lonely old man the last words she said

So why keep doing it hoping someone will care
A new relationship would be nice If I did dare
When I look in the mirror I see a strangers face
Can't even remember when he took my place
Sorry to have to dump my pity all on you
I guess I just wanted your opinion, your point of view
Sill I suppose the world still has to spin around
You will find someone, oh I wish I had a pound

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Reply #17 posted 06/19/12 3:33am

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I just read through the thread--you have a very heart-felt and nice way with words.

[Edited 6/19/12 3:43am]

"Music gives a soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination and life to everything." --Plato

https://youtu.be/CVwv9LZMah0
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