It must be the cold,

For no other reason can be made clear,

For such stupidity and self-absorbed do-nothingness,

Or perhaps growing old,

The potential in youth has all but disappeared,

Leaving behind a resume of tender forgetfulness,

A shrewdness of apes,

Could be more elegant in such gaudy attire,

Searching out your next pull to the generic beat,

Seek not the escape,

Of a night’s passion you filthy scumbag liar,

Without karmic recompense to the maker whilst you meet,

I am the full stop to the sentence,

You stupid fuck. You useless stupid fuck,

Not the imago for your twisted mind to do with what you please,

Perhaps you should turn to providence,

You stupid fuck, you useless schmuck.

For like all your blokes, he likes you on your fucking knees.

~Take Care

--Me

Apes will only be shrewd

When they shrug away

The ignorantly lewd

Of ineffectual humanity...

purplethunder3121 said:

Apes will only be shrewd

When they shrug away

The ignorantly lewd

Of ineffectual humanity...

oh that's brilliant.

My poem was just a cheesy breakup poem.

I like our twist better.

imago said:

purplethunder3121 said:

Apes will only be shrewd

When they shrug away

The ignorantly lewd

Of ineffectual humanity...

oh that's brilliant.

My poem was just a cheesy breakup poem.

I like our twist better.

I liked your cheesiness in this one. Hmm, tag-team poetry might be a fun post on this almost dead part of the forum...

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