http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=172895

Tell me what you think!

Thanks!

usually love your stuff...this is interesting but not my thang

Slave2daGroove said:

usually love your stuff...this is interesting but not my thang

Try this:

http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=173043

bookmarked

artist08 said:

Slave2daGroove said:

usually love your stuff...this is interesting but not my thang

Try this:

http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=173043

O.K., I hear things better here...the vibe is killer Curtis Mayfeild but then the Chorus sounds like it's a Bee Gees thing and then it goes back to Curtis...

IMO the Chorus is another song and the Curtis vibe just needs a Chorus that doesn't change so much or changes in more of a Curtis direction

Great musicianship and production as usual...it's also cool to see how you've grown since I last listened to your stuff

Thx for the experience

Slave2daGroove said:

artist08 said:

Try this:

http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=173043

O.K., I hear things better here...the vibe is killer Curtis Mayfeild but then the Chorus sounds like it's a Bee Gees thing and then it goes back to Curtis...

IMO the Chorus is another song and the Curtis vibe just needs a Chorus that doesn't change so much or changes in more of a Curtis direction

Great musicianship and production as usual...it's also cool to see how you've grown since I last listened to your stuff

Thx for the experience

Slave -

Thanks always for your input. It's greatly appreciated! I was feeling the Bee Gees vibe after coming up with the chord progression for the chorus. You shoulda heard it before I toned it down and made it more "me." Straight up Barry Gibb!!

Hahaha

artist08 said:

http://www.icompositions....sid=172895

Tell me what you think!

Thanks!

I'm on your side

tried listening to this last night but friends kept interrupting my peace time...I'll try again tonight