Hey everyone! I'm kinda new to the org... BUT I NEED YOUR HONEST OPINION! Since anyone who likes Prince has a knowing of what REAL music sounds like, I need you guys to tell me whether I'm a good writer or not Please listen to the song and don't be afraid to tell me it sucks THANKS IN ADVANCE!

http://soundcloud.com/bre...fusion-001

I liked it. It was very 80's & really sounds like something from a Sega Genesis Sonic videogame...

Tittypants said:

I liked it. It was very 80's & really sounds like something from a Sega Genesis Sonic videogame...

Yay

it did sound 80s but it sucks. that slap bass from a keyboard is just plain ugly. it did sound like a videogame or background music from an old actioncartoon series.

its kinda funny though, its just real unfunky.

[Edited 11/24/11 0:45am]

Not talkin about instruments right now, that can be fixed easily, I'm just talking about the composing and the way things are laid out, like I said, instruments can be changed easily (:

SpookyElektrix said:

it did sound 80s but it sucks. that slap bass from a keyboard is just plain ugly. it did sound like a videogame or background music from an old actioncartoon series.

its kinda funny though, its just real unfunky.

[Edited 11/24/11 0:45am]

I'd like to hear it at a slower tempo. General MIDI played so fast doesn't sound so great. You clearly could write a good song if you wanted. Maybe going down a step during the verses would keep it interesting, instead of hammering away on C the whole time, which gets boring.