Hi! I recorded this track as a present for an ex bf some years ago. I'd like to know your opinions. Thanks! (plz, forgive my bad pronounciation... hehe)

http://soundcloud.com/prince1984/betcha-by-golly-wow-prince

Not bad, but the tempo is too slow. It was recorded by the Sylistics and Prince covered it in its original tempo. I like your voice and the smoothness of your flow. Upbeat the tempo and it will be on point. IMHO

Funkysexual said:

Hi! I recorded this track as a present for an ex bf some years ago. I'd like to know your opinions. Thanks! (plz, forgive my bad pronounciation... hehe)

http://soundcloud.com/pri...wow-prince

I listened to all three of the tunes you posted.....very nice....actually, more than nice...very good.

Now, may I give you some suggestions to get more folks to listen to your work?

Oh yeah, I'm not going to wait for your reply...I'm just gonna tell ya.

It might be very helpful to acknowledge your listeners, and to listen and look at some other folks

who have posted their art on the org.

I won't call myself an artist, but I love listening and looking at other people's work; however, I seldom post responses

in here anymore, because artists(whether it be musicians, visual art, or poetry/writing) fly in here,

post their work, and they don't acknowledge their listeners.

It's sorta like. wham. bam. thank you. mam And personally, I'm not into that sort of

ruthlessness

It may seem like I'm pickin' on you in particular...but actually, my suggestions go for about 3/4

of the artists in here.

obsessed said:

Funkysexual said:

Hi! I recorded this track as a present for an ex bf some years ago. I'd like to know your opinions. Thanks! (plz, forgive my bad pronounciation... hehe)

http://soundcloud.com/pri...wow-prince

I listened to all three of the tunes you posted.....very nice....actually, more than nice...very good.

Now, may I give you some suggestions to get more folks to listen to your work?

Oh yeah, I'm not going to wait for your reply...I'm just gonna tell ya.

It might be very helpful to acknowledge your listeners, and to listen and look at some other folks

who have posted their art on the org.

I won't call myself an artist, but I love listening and looking at other people's work; however, I seldom post responses

in here anymore, because artists(whether it be musicians, visual art, or poetry/writing) fly in here,

post their work, and they don't acknowledge their listeners.

It's sorta like. wham. bam. thank you. mam And personally, I'm not into that sort of

ruthlessness

It may seem like I'm pickin' on you in particular...but actually, my suggestions go for about 3/4

of the artists in here.

Hello obsessed:

First of all, thank you for your honest comment. I know it might seem I just want to get some feedback and inflate my ego with it, but in fact, i'd really appreciate critical comments, in order to improve.

I'm a regular reader of the org, and i love to listen to tracks posted by other members, although I rarely write or reply... Perhaps I should do it more, i know. Ghost forumers don't contribute to a good forum, but I don't like to think they're just selfish: maybe they're too busy or shy to write, god only knows haha.

All in all, thank you one more time for your reply, and i'll try to be more participatory from now on.

Funkysexual said:

obsessed said:

I listened to all three of the tunes you posted.....very nice....actually, more than nice...very good.

Now, may I give you some suggestions to get more folks to listen to your work?

Oh yeah, I'm not going to wait for your reply...I'm just gonna tell ya.

It might be very helpful to acknowledge your listeners, and to listen and look at some other folks

who have posted their art on the org.

I won't call myself an artist, but I love listening and looking at other people's work; however, I seldom post responses

in here anymore, because artists(whether it be musicians, visual art, or poetry/writing) fly in here,

post their work, and they don't acknowledge their listeners.

It's sorta like. wham. bam. but not even a thank you mam And personally, I'm not into that sort of ruthlessness

It may seem like I'm pickin' on you in particular...but actually, my suggestions go for about 3/4

of the artists in here.

Hello obsessed:

First of all, thank you for your honest comment. I know it might seem I just want to get some feedback and inflate my ego with it, but in fact, i'd really appreciate critical comments, in order to improve.

Actually many of the artists have mentioned they'd appreciate critical comments in order

to improve, and I don't disagree with that. I think critical comments can be very helpful to an

artist.

But here's the nitty-gritty of it all. If an artist has fans who appreciate them for what they do,

the fans need to be appreciated in turn. Afterall, where would Lady Ga-Ga be if she didn't appreciate

and thank her fans? My feeling is she doesn't appreciate criticism quite as much however

Anyway you seem sincere, and your music is excellent, so carry on!