i know there not the most exciting of tracks, they did have samples in but i took them out for copywirght reasons.

Anyway, first time i've posted my music on the net today, hope somone has a listen!

http://www.exoak.f2s.com/...riskal.mp3

http://www.exoak.f2s.com/...gnathy.mp3

Nice Welcome to the forum

Great stuff! Mellow, great balance of most of the intruments, very "vibey", it's really cool.

JamesMarshallHendrix said:

yeah i agree. Like u said they arent like exciting or anything like that, but it does have a nice touch 2 it, sound clear (unlike my shit), and has a steady balance. (not all over the place like mine lol!).

Anybody care to give me s...dback too? It's probably not for everybody, why am I saying probably? I know it's not for everybody.

TreeDog said:

the site dont work 4 me...it didnt load..

the site dont work 4 me:(

Phil said:

Chriskal:
Why don't you try cutting the drums to half time. Would move the song from sounding like a stroll through the marketplace into something much more romantic - oh - I hear that it's half-time in the middle, around 2:00. The uptempo just takes the impact away for me - but maybe it's the samples that added to the song? who knows... as it is, it's just redundant and there doesn't seem to be a lot going on - it's pretty, don't get me wrong, just seems to be raw and incomplete.

Dignathy:
Again, it sounds incomplete, like it's definitely the background music to a song or something.


Both tracks DEFINITELY sound good, like something from Stevie Wonder's catalog... maybe Joe Jackson?

TreeDog said:

Oh wow. That's a ween-fluenced performance. I wonder if maybe the guitars were in tune... maybe it would have a greater impact?

Wow. This is just odd stuff man. Keep going, don't stop.