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New Year's Eve Blues
Last night I was alone again In a room full of news drinking exotic champagnes --still had the blues
Dont get me wrong there was fun to be had We made a soul train line And a Conga chain too At midnight there was me and...no you
A flute of champagne, bubbles and all, could not quench my thirst Not like your arms around my neck, tugging my shirt The way you used to do Long before our hearts turned shades of blue
I imagined you standing with me last night in your favorite slacks and shirt pearly white remembering the look in your eyes that very first night When the both of us knew our love was all right
Come bathe me again like you did before Let the water run down my back and onto the floor Towel me off, rub lotion on my back I'll turn toward you and give you some dap
Bring to me a glass of water I'll drink it up like there is no other my thirst will quench and so will yours The Love we make behind french doors
As my heart aches for the love I am missing I stare out my window Its getting late, another night in the dark Alone again, yes it is true
~this poem is dedicated to all the single ladies/fellas out there~
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[Edited 1/1/11 19:51pm] | |
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Thanks for the do you like the poem? | |
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Thanks. | |
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Your welcome. New Year celebration is a good-for-nothing pagan tradition ...I can't really relate to that, but I can relate to missing someone dearly - any given time or place. ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• S(((O)))u¬...._-..-_......_-∆-...•••••••••••••••••••••••••••• | |
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Yes, I agree on the celebrations stuff -- my friends literally begged me to come -- hadn't seen them for nearly a year.
Missing someone is not a once-a-year ocurrance is it? its a dull, persistent, feeling as so well depicted in one of my favorite musical classics, Billy Holiday's Good Morning Heartache...
Good morning heartache
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Love it. | |
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precisely. | |
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What a beautifull but sad poem...? i hope the one you love comes 4u. sweetthing..? .. Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not go out and look for a successful personality and duplicate it.”
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Thank you for your response. And thanks for the prayers. I'm certain it will work out. The poem is partially an excercise in writing but does contain some truths within. | |
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Your welcome sweething ...? .. .. Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not go out and look for a successful personality and duplicate it.”
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" I never saw an ugly thing in my life: for let the form of an object be what it may,- light, shade, and perspective will always make it beautiful." - John Constable | |
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Awwwwe, thanks Sunflower. Have a great new year! | |
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Aww..this is sweet....sweet thing. I had no boo on New Years eve so I can def relate:-( | |
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