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Thread started 02/27/11 6:43pm

IamFunkay7

Peom: Eclipse of the Heart

You saw right through my eyes,
created a memory bank in my soul,
I fell into a state of uncertainty,
lost in the abyss of dreams and stories told,

Give me my quiet time inside these walls,
of my mind of course,
taken in like small sips of wine,
desired, not forced,

Into the stream of stars I fell into a melody,
where silence was played repeatedly,
and the minds dancing with me,
were all a part of myself..

Given into these abstract dreams,
that climbs into the sanity of my emotions,
I created a place where I can dream,
where others can see me, but never the notion,

I bear this sign on my heart that speaks,
louder than a dream full of concerts and pairs,
of songs rejoicing while the winter snairs,
speak loudly, this place in my mind is deep,

and I have no light to shine for a wanderer,
for I hold the gates to the key,
and only see others wonder,
whats in this place that seems,

to be so full of life, light, and wisdom,
listening to the rain drops when the moon cries,
burying the future, when my hopes die,
I want you.. to know what gift has been given

and I share it alone in this cold happy hope,
I call my peace and sanity where the dreams are gone,
and reality is the substance of life, when I penetrate my skin,
with an IV called eternity..

The wind disguises itself as my breaths flowing,
from lungs and I slumber not until dawn,
has risen to rejoin me,

Let the sky capture this moment of uncertainties,
and the Earth stand still with this vision,
given in to all these parts of me,
this book that has been written...

Give me peace, Give me love,
Call me home,
The world is all you're after,
when you face it alone..

Copyrighted @2011

E.U.C.

Iamfunkay7

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Reply #1 posted 02/27/11 6:45pm

thebeautifulon
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very nice poem
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Reply #2 posted 02/27/11 7:47pm

Francis7

IamFunkay7 said:

You saw right through my eyes,
created a memory bank in my soul,
I fell into a state of uncertainty,
lost in the abyss of dreams and stories told,

Give me my quiet time inside these walls,
of my mind of course,
taken in like small sips of wine,
desired, not forced,

Into the stream of stars I fell into a melody,
where silence was played repeatedly,
and the minds dancing with me,
were all a part of myself..

Given into these abstract dreams,
that climbs into the sanity of my emotions,
I created a place where I can dream,
where others can see me, but never the notion,

I bear this sign on my heart that speaks,
louder than a dream full of concerts and pairs,
of songs rejoicing while the winter snairs,
speak loudly, this place in my mind is deep,

and I have no light to shine for a wanderer,
for I hold the gates to the key,
and only see others wonder,
whats in this place that seems,

to be so full of life, light, and wisdom,
listening to the rain drops when the moon cries,
burying the future, when my hopes die,
I want you.. to know what gift has been given

and I share it alone in this cold happy hope,
I call my peace and sanity where the dreams are gone,
and reality is the substance of life, when I penetrate my skin,
with an IV called eternity..

The wind disguises itself as my breaths flowing,
from lungs and I slumber not until dawn,
has risen to rejoin me,

Let the sky capture this moment of uncertainties,
and the Earth stand still with this vision,
given in to all these parts of me,
this book that has been written...

Give me peace, Give me love,
Call me home,
The world is all you're after,
when you face it alone..

Copyrighted @2011

E.U.C.

Iamfunkay7

Nice!

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Reply #3 posted 02/27/11 9:01pm

sweething

Nicely done.

[Edited 2/27/11 15:00pm]

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Reply #4 posted 02/28/11 1:47pm

grace77

beautiful, it touches me deeply...

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Reply #5 posted 03/02/11 4:41pm

xt1000

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What is a peom?

"If you really want something in this life, you have to work for it - Now quiet, they're about to announce the lottery numbers!"

- Homer Simpson
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