New topic
Printablevery cool tracks. I like the first one, "loving u" the most. | |
- E-mail - orgNote -  Report post to moderator |
akossofi said: These are good demos. I like your vocal harmonies a lot. 'Loving U' has a really good melody. I would perhaps insert a breakdown a little earlier, don't make us wait so long for it. And some non-synth based instrumentation (guitars, real drums, etc.) would add interest and make the track stronger.
Keep up the good work. Post some more when you have 'em.
akossofi Thank u so much | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
akossofi said: These are good demos. I like your vocal harmonies a lot. 'Loving U' has a really good melody. I would perhaps insert a breakdown a little earlier, don't make us wait so long for it. And some non-synth based instrumentation (guitars, real drums, etc.) would add interest and make the track stronger.
Keep up the good work. Post some more when you have 'em.
akossofi Thx so much | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
Listened to the demo's before and they are good songs. I agree about the point about real instruments as they'd make them more polished. Like for 'That Soul' you could use a Roots style drum sound on that track, maybe add a solid bassline to the track too and keys on top so it adds to the Neo-Soul sound. Also you should finish 'Feel So Good'. | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
hhhhdmt said: I think the second one is pretty good but its the first one that i really love, ur wow ur talented. Keep up the good work and post more stuff soon Thank u and I will soon | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
"Pretty Girls" is dope. I make beats but I don't know what I would suggest to tweak. These are sounding good. | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
Cinnie said: "Pretty Girls" is dope. I make beats but I don't know what I would suggest to tweak. These are sounding good. Can I hear a few of yours? | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
"Sister" with harmonica. I can see "Shug" shake her shimmie. | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
Here's hoping someone very special takes notice. I did. All the best. 
Billmenever said: "Sister" with harmonica. I can see "Shug" shake her shimmie. Thx so much | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
i'm liking your sound. your rendition of sister is really nice. that soul, pretty girls...all good stuff. | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
Sounds good! "For what it's worth, you're somewhere here on Earth..." | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
Nice tracks | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
u have a very soothing voice & these songs r groovy! | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
vegascleopatra said: u have a very soothing voice & these songs r groovy! Thank u so much | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
sounds excellent, best of luck | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
uapeople said: sounds excellent, best of luck Thx so much | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |
thx for your time | |
| - E-mail - orgNote - Report post to moderator |