Greetings fellow Orgers!

For your listening pleasure, please find the first song from my soon to be release third album "Ear Candy."

The song is entitled "Beggin' Man's Blues." It's an attempt to bring a topic which has haunted men for centuries: Equality in going down . . . It's not always a two-way street . . .

Without further adieu:

http://www.soundclick.com/dustindeboer

As always, constructive criticism is appreciated. Enjoy!

Much love,

Dustin

the soundscape you create is interesting. i think the drums need tightening up(quantising) and the backing vocals in the chorus are a bit monotone, maybe they need tuning. also, i think there is too much going on too soon. i really like the cascading effect of the instrumentation though. maybe the drums need more production, as far as being more prominient. and have the other instruments appear in phases, in cameo roles maybe.

i didnt listen to it all, this is just my initial reaction to 3/4 of it.

I truly appreciate the listen and input. You've made some good points. It's always good to have a second pair of ears give a fresh listen, especially someone who has the ability to listen to the different levels of instrumentation as compared to the whole composition.