I have to say, your stuff just keeps getting worse and worse. Singmia, quiet7, well... hell, any alter you've used seems to have burdened us all with this....drivel.

It's not so much the fact that your poetry isn't any good that astounds me though. It's that it isn't good, and it seems to be marketed (and I use this word deliberately) as profound or worth reading.

I still don't' understand who your intended audience is.

Like cuneiform, the message appears self-agrandizing more-so than uplifting. I don't think the mighty Jehova, whose documented bloodlust colors his judgment, would really care for a follower trying to bask in his limelight under the guise of devotion...dressed in such a gaudy rhetorical frock.

signing each poem "me" is also hilarious and reinforces the afore mentioned points.

I have to admit. I vacillate between utter repulsion and extreme fascination when reading this mess. A bad poem can be improved. This insistence on self-expression under the premise your bad poems are good or worthy...well, I'm not so sure.

Keep them coming though. I'm utterly fascinated by this nonsense now.

Take care.

...Me

[Edited 7/19/10 20:18pm]

Ankhesenamun said:

I met u one day... Saturday... U both sat around, the divine table found... U both greeted me so well, I gave your wife a smile and some flowers... U both asked me, what's my name... I smiled said, "rice" U thought was nice... I handed out my kind nickname... U took it just the same, was such a lovely time... Being in peace with u. So now yrs go by so very fast... But ur kindness never faded away... So I must say... Your both like, SUNSHINE FROM HEAVEN. Written for Larry, Tina and Tia much love for the day together... God Jehovah be Blessed. Take care  me

Walk faster sweet Baby, don't let the bad boys (good-for-nothing men) get you down !

(They don't know the brilliance of the pen, their keypads are dis-eased & their fingertips sick.)

[Edited 7/22/10 8:35am]

emile58 said:

[Edited 7/22/10 8:35am]

I quite enjoyed your original post before this edit.

TheVoid said:

emile58 said:

[Edited 7/22/10 8:35am]

I quite enjoyed your original post before this edit.

Thank you!

TheVoid said:

I have to say, your stuff just keeps getting worse and worse. Singmia, quiet7, well... hell, any alter you've used seems to have burdened us all with this....drivel.

It's not so much the fact that your poetry isn't any good that astounds me though. It's that it isn't good, and it seems to be marketed (and I use this word deliberately) as profound or worth reading.

I still don't' understand who your intended audience is.

Like cuneiform, the message appears self-agrandizing more-so than uplifting. I don't think the mighty Jehova, whose documented bloodlust colors his judgment, would really care for a follower trying to bask in his limelight under the guise of devotion...dressed in such a gaudy rhetorical frock.

signing each poem "me" is also hilarious and reinforces the afore mentioned points.

I have to admit. I vacillate between utter repulsion and extreme fascination when reading this mess. A bad poem can be improved. This insistence on self-expression under the premise your bad poems are good or worthy...well, I'm not so sure.

Keep them coming though. I'm utterly fascinated by this nonsense now.

Take care.

...Me

[Edited 7/19/10 20:18pm]

I have to say,you must have been really un- popular with females as a teen.
Most of them were no doubt creeped out by you and the other 1% only spoke to you out of sheer pity.This would explain why you receive such pleasure as an adult from bullying and disrespecting females.
Shame on you.

vault4sale said:

TheVoid said:

I have to say, your stuff just keeps getting worse and worse. Singmia, quiet7, well... hell, any alter you've used seems to have burdened us all with this....drivel.

It's not so much the fact that your poetry isn't any good that astounds me though. It's that it isn't good, and it seems to be marketed (and I use this word deliberately) as profound or worth reading.

I still don't' understand who your intended audience is.

Like cuneiform, the message appears self-agrandizing more-so than uplifting. I don't think the mighty Jehova, whose documented bloodlust colors his judgment, would really care for a follower trying to bask in his limelight under the guise of devotion...dressed in such a gaudy rhetorical frock.

signing each poem "me" is also hilarious and reinforces the afore mentioned points.

I have to admit. I vacillate between utter repulsion and extreme fascination when reading this mess. A bad poem can be improved. This insistence on self-expression under the premise your bad poems are good or worthy...well, I'm not so sure.

Keep them coming though. I'm utterly fascinated by this nonsense now.

Take care.

...Me

[Edited 7/19/10 20:18pm]

I have to say,you must have been really un- popular with females as a teen.
Most of them were no doubt creeped out by you and the other 1% only spoke to you out of sheer pity.This would explain why you receive such pleasure as an adult from bullying and disrespecting females.
Shame on you.

Oh please.

I'm not the one that wrote the bad poem.

Blame the OP.

TheVoid said:

vault4sale said:

I have to say,you must have been really un- popular with females as a teen.
Most of them were no doubt creeped out by you and the other 1% only spoke to you out of sheer pity.This would explain why you receive such pleasure as an adult from bullying and disrespecting females.
Shame on you.

Oh please.

I'm not the one that wrote the bad poem.

Blame the OP.

lol yes and ur creativity is so brilliant..

NOT

It is based on the lack of self love and respect u have for urself. Its kind of sad actually that u feel the need 2 attack others for this reason. Therefor ur "art" if u wanna call it such reflects ur need 2 make fun of others 2 try 2 make urslef feel some sort of self esteem, so honestly based on ur lol "art" u have no place saying what is a good poem or not.

emile58 said:

[Edited 7/22/10 8:35am]

U r a follower

U shouldnt be it could lead u 2 darkness

vault4sale said:

TheVoid said:

Oh please.

I'm not the one that wrote the bad poem.

Blame the OP.

lol yes and ur creativity is so brilliant..

NOT

It is based on the lack of self love and respect u have for urself. Its kind of sad actually that u feel the need 2 attack others for this reason. Therefor ur "art" if u wanna call it such reflects ur need 2 make fun of others 2 try 2 make urslef feel some sort of self esteem, so honestly based on ur lol "art" u have no place saying what is a good poem or not.

cracking up

vault4sale said:

emile58 said:

[Edited 7/22/10 8:35am]

U r a follower

U shouldnt be it could lead u 2 darkness

You are typing in English. You should use punctuation marks and spellcheck.

TheVoid said:

vault4sale said:

U r a follower

U shouldnt be it could lead u 2 darkness

You are typing in English. You should use punctuation marks and spellcheck.

Not only are you blind to poetry, you are also deaf to sounds, you must not be able to smell the aroma either or taste the truth. Using rules of grammar to spit back is pathetic & surely a sign of weakness...come to your SENSES instead of dedicating yourself to shameful things...otherwise; enjoy the sulphur, as long as you will last in it.

pinkdolphin said:

TheVoid said:

You are typing in English. You should use punctuation marks and spellcheck.

Not only are you blind to poetry, you are also deaf to sounds, you must not be able to smell the aroma either or taste the truth. Using rules of grammar to spit back is pathetic & surely a sign of weakness...come to your SENSES instead of dedicating yourself to shameful things...otherwise; enjoy the sulphur, as long as you will last in it.

So far, all I'm reading from you folks is conjecture

Look, we need to look at the facts here. The OP used a poem that is just dreadful.

Now you can attempt to tear my character apart all you want, but it doesn't change

how awful the original poem is.

I mean, you can invent a childhood for me that involves molestation, Satan worship...

hell, anything you'd like to make up--that's fine.

But at the end of the day, the poem still sucks. And nothing you've said (which by the

way is hilarious ) will improve it.

SingMia, I beg you... You can make all of this end by studying poetry or attempting

to write something from the heart rather than self-agrandizing rehtoric that

really just becomes a patische of itself.

I beg you at this point, SingMia. I beg you.

Why do people highlight their, erm.. strangeness by using bold, coloured fonts and background colours that make their posts nigh impossible to read?

Don't get me wrong, I like the fact that they distinguish themselves instantly and are easier to spot/ignore, but surely they know that. So why do it?

Enquiring minds need to know

@ thevoid : I AM NOT SINGMIA

@ erik319 : I highlighted the background since it was a special message, not having anything to do with the original post 'Sunshine Like Heaven'

pinkdolphin said:

@ thevoid : I AM NOT SINGMIA

@ erik319 : I highlighted the background since it was a special message, not having anything to do with the original post 'Sunshine Like Heaven'

Wait.

How do you know you're not Singmia?

TheVoid said:

pinkdolphin said:

@ thevoid : I AM NOT SINGMIA

@ erik319 : I highlighted the background since it was a special message, not having anything to do with the original post 'Sunshine Like Heaven'

Wait.

How do you know you're not Singmia?

Maybe we're all Singmia and we've just not realised it yet.

erik319 said:

TheVoid said:

Wait.

How do you know you're not Singmia?

Maybe we're all Singmia and we've just not realised it yet.

TheVoid said:

erik319 said:

Maybe we're all Singmia and we've just not realised it yet.

Aww thanks, I needed that. Still makes me actually laugh out loud when I see it!

I think I might post like this all the time from now on just for the hell of it.

for vault4sale:

why do you say i walk in darkness?

Why you send me an orgnote sayin stuff i have nothing to do with.

Saying prince has been banned from the org?

LOL

did i miss a meeting?

I just came out of anastesia..i was playing gypsy jazz with some folks and then woke up....a nice nurse greeted me.(i had a problem with my balls)

So be nice..I'm still shakey and have a nice pirate's scar on my weener.

Just don't say i walk in darkness.

I walk in music.

Like p-funk..what comes to me..

I don't have an army of religion backing it up or walking in front of it.

And don't quote Bob marley again pls..ever..

be well..

[Edited 7/28/10 11:53am]

i mean "snowball"..don't send me orgnote sayin shit!

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Umm.... y'all realize that a good number of the responses are actually FROM the OP, right?

emile58 said:

for vault4sale:

why do you say i walk in darkness?

Why you send me an orgnote sayin stuff i have nothing to do with.

Saying prince has been banned from the org?

LOL

did i miss a meeting?

I just came out of anastesia..i was playing gypsy jazz with some folks and then woke up....a nice nurse greeted me.(i had a problem with my balls)

So be nice..I'm still shakey and have a nice pirate's scar on my weener.

Just don't say i walk in darkness.

I walk in music.

Like p-funk..what comes to me..

I don't have an army of religion backing it up or walking in front of it.

And don't quote Bob marley again pls..ever..

be well..

[Edited 7/28/10 11:53am]

First of all u didnt get the quote, u shouldn't be a follower it will lead u 2 darkness... THE VOID

It was not an insult it was a play on words which u didn't get...

I never orged u anything about prince being banned from the org so that is not the truth

Or is it?????

My wife orged those who were making fun of someone for NO REASON who were involved in the thread so u knew my response to the Voids rash statements because I was blocked from responding which is why I quoted we will continue speaking the truth even if the "keepers" try 2 ban or block us.

as far as this goes....

did i miss a meeting?

I just came out of anastesia..i was playing gypsy jazz with some folks and then woke up....a nice nurse greeted me.(i had a problem with my balls)

So be nice..I'm still shakey and have a nice pirate's scar on my weener

U have completly lost me and u r most likely

b/c it made no sense, it seems like something the Void would say so it must be more code between the two of u

emile58 said:

i mean "snowball"..don't send me orgnote sayin shit!

Since my WIFE has been "silenced" once again and she cant throw anymore snowballs at the moment I'll let her speak 2 u on my account...

No problemo Emile I have no desire 2 contact u further ANYWAY I got my husbands point across and at ur unkind request I will refrain from getting u wet.

wink

FIRE N ICE

Cerebus said:

Umm.... y'all realize that a good number of the responses are actually FROM the OP, right?

YES!

She has alters to support herself. It's REALLY strange!