Birth.
No choice given.
I want to go back home.
Water flows. Overflows.
Why am i here?

Senses.........uploading.
Interaction with species/////<success>
Why do i have to play with plastic?
.... is typing
ruoy trap fo eht enihcam

Why are the big people fighting?
.... is typing
//////greed\\\\power.,.money
:.......\\\\\System malfunctioning/////
Oh please let me go home.
.... repairing malfunction,......overriding
This is your home!
.........virus removed.


Eat 3 times a day.
Wash to conform.
<Realisation downloading>
Individuality/Choice......<DENIED>

What’s your name?

blahblahblahblah.
hahahahahahahaha lol.

Pain, anxiety and depression.......uploading

When i close my eyes: i go back home.
The silence.
Darkness.
I’ll do anything to go that.

This place is:
Loud
Selfish
Cruel
and
Mean.

If you won’t let me,
i’ll...............

Offline. 

Timothy Porter 2010

Interesting perspective

Is it influenced by radiohead's "OK, Computer"?

Funny enough i'm learning how to play Climbing Up The Walls from Ok Computer on my guitar at the moment - but sadly no. I can understand why you drew this comparison to Radiohead. However i felt really upset and isolated recently and wrote this in a couple of minutes. The day after, i re-edited it and what you see now is the finished product. When i'm in a certain mood, i just let the pen write then read it back later. It is inspired by my constant fear of death, when i start to feel lonely and isolated these thoughts come to me. This makes me sound like i'm likely to commit suicide (which i could never do, because i have so much to give to the world through my work in film, music and writing, also i'm so scared of it i could never do it.) But i am sick of the world in some aspects. this is what i wanted to portray in the poem. I'm thankful for your feedback, it inspires me to keep writing

I have two other poems i would like to showcase, if the board is interested i'll showcase them.

P.S. surprised no one compared this to Colonized Mind haha!

Here's another one i just finished writing today:

http://everythingturnspurple.blogspot.com/2010/07/my-body.html