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Pretty sweet, Some of the trax almost have a Van Hunt vibe to them. Funky beats too & the song 'that soul' w/ the organ intro is nice. I also like the beat on 'i like', almost has a childlike sound to the beat. | |
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I was thinking about you yesterday.
welcome back!  That's some good shit! | |
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emile58 said: I was thinking about you yesterday.
welcome back! U should think about me more  | |
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Wow, is all I can say.
What do you do in this band? I can't wait to hear some final recordings of this, your vibe is happening. Can you do this in a live setting? Do you play out with any of it? | |
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Slave2daGroove said: Wow, is all I can say.
What do you do in this band? I can't wait to hear some final recordings of this, your vibe is happening. Lol I am the band lol....I wish I did have a band...no all music and voices are me. Can you do this in a live setting? Do you play out with any of it? | |
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Wow.....
You have an amazing funk sound to your music. I feel it's retrospective, but has a modern feel. Your bass and organ are simply fantastic. I love a heavy bass in music. But I feel there's something missing....I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe the word "missing" isn't the proper word. It's there, but it's not coming thru as best as it can be. It's the magic. See, every memorable, beautiful song as a soul and magical quality about it. It's what makes or breaks a song, it's what gives it's beauty and immortality, it's what makes the listener lose themselves in the music. For instance, if you listened to Chopin's Étude Op. 10 No. 3 or "Tristesse", even though there are no words and no back up instrumentation....you can feel the pain of the composer, his homesickness, his longing. The melody by itself should convey this magic, these emotions, and then lyrics would just bring it home. My suggestion would be just listen to your instrumentals (melody), and see if you feel what you want your song to convey. If you feel it, then add the lyrics to enhance it. Your singing style also helps bring out the magic in the song, and I personally think you're a good singer. The same criteria that apply for a melody apply to singing style as well. In other words, what you're feeling while you're writing/singing your music, your listener should feel the same when they hear it. I hear some Prince inspiration in "I Like"...  Very nice. And the piano on "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" was just divine. I sense a sorta classical style/jazz feel with the piano and it just gives the song a new direction than say Judy Garland's musical-style version. The harmony of voices was top notch. Nice interpretation of a classic I say.
Hope I made sense. If I didn't I apologize. But you have real potential. Keep at it.  | |
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SherryJackson said: Wow.....
You have an amazing funk sound to your music. I feel it's retrospective, but has a modern feel. Your bass and organ are simply fantastic. I love a heavy bass in music. But I feel there's something missing....I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe the word "missing" isn't the proper word. It's there, but it's not coming thru as best as it can be. It's the magic. See, every memorable, beautiful song as a soul and magical quality about it. It's what makes or breaks a song, it's what gives it's beauty and immortality, it's what makes the listener lose themselves in the music. For instance, if you listened to Chopin's Étude Op. 10 No. 3 or "Tristesse", even though there are no words and no back up instrumentation....you can feel the pain of the composer, his homesickness, his longing. The melody by itself should convey this magic, these emotions, and then lyrics would just bring it home. My suggestion would be just listen to your instrumentals (melody), and see if you feel what you want your song to convey. If you feel it, then add the lyrics to enhance it. Your singing style also helps bring out the magic in the song, and I personally think you're a good singer. The same criteria that apply for a melody apply to singing style as well. In other words, what you're feeling while you're writing/singing your music, your listener should feel the same when they hear it. I hear some Prince inspiration in "I Like"... Very nice. And the piano on "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" was just divine. I sense a sorta classical style/jazz feel with the piano and it just gives the song a new direction than say Judy Garland's musical-style version. The harmony of voices was top notch. Nice interpretation of a classic I say.
Hope I made sense. If I didn't I apologize. But you have real potential. Keep at it. Thank u | |
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lemme go have a listen...  'why y'all trying to say goodbye? I didn't go anywhere, I'm right here, im all around you,always..'
in a line from my dream, I heard a voice and saw a silhouette in a chair.. | |
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camrod66 said: Slave2daGroove said: Wow, is all I can say.
What do you do in this band? I can't wait to hear some final recordings of this, your vibe is happening. Lol I am the band lol....I wish I did have a band...no all music and voices are me. Can you do this in a live setting? Do you play out with any of it? Awesome, go out and get signed. Send your demo to Ubiquity Records and Daptone Records. Get a band together and start playing this music in front of people. You will succeed, keep it this real and don't compromise. I'll be watching for your debut and throwing down the cash for it! | |
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Well thank u so much bro really cool of you ..... Slave2daGroove said: camrod66 said: Awesome, go out and get signed. Send your demo to Ubiquity Records and Daptone Records. Get a band together and start playing this music in front of people. You will succeed, keep it this real and don't compromise. I'll be watching for your debut and throwing down the cash for it! | |
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i dont know too much bout music..
im all ears.. 
but i do know what i like to listen to... now that i am back here for a few minutes im gonna go listen to the rest 'why y'all trying to say goodbye? I didn't go anywhere, I'm right here, im all around you,always..'
in a line from my dream, I heard a voice and saw a silhouette in a chair.. | |
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You don't suck. 
Are you the guy who did that 'Gotta Go' song? I liked that. MY COUSIN WORKS IN A PHARMACY AND SHE SAID THEY ENEMA'D PRANCE INTO OBLIVION WITH FENTONILS!! | |
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Fauxie said: You don't suck.
Are you the guy who did that 'Gotta Go' song? I liked that. yes i did do that and i am glad u liked it thx again | |
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Nice R.I.P. Micheal,James,Rick,and all u other funkateers | |
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Funky funky Funky. Like it. Don't stop achieving your place in the spaces that need to be filled. There is a void.  will ALWAYS think of  like a "ACT OF GOD"! N another realm. mean of all people who might of been aliens or angels.if found out that wasn't of this earth, would not have been that surprised. R.I.P. |
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KCOOLMUZIQ said: Funky funky Funky. Like it. Don't stop achieving your place in the spaces that need to be filled. There is a void.
Thx my man.... | |
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the tracks are funky. Very easy to listen to.Good work. senualsuduction1 | |
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spicecutie17 said: the tracks are funky. Very easy to listen to.Good work.
Thx so much | |
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pretty cool tracks!
'gotta go' is my fav  May you rest in peace, my beautiful queen, Teena Marie  | |
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sugartuff said: pretty cool tracks!
'gotta go' is my fav Thanx so much | |
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Very good.
Nice and mellow and my fav is 'i like' That sounds very P influenced to me!!! Shut up already, damn. | |
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SherryJackson said: Wow.....
You have an amazing funk sound to your music. I feel it's retrospective, but has a modern feel. Your bass and organ are simply fantastic. I love a heavy bass in music. But I feel there's something missing....I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe the word "missing" isn't the proper word. It's there, but it's not coming thru as best as it can be. It's the magic. See, every memorable, beautiful song as a soul and magical quality about it. It's what makes or breaks a song, it's what gives it's beauty and immortality, it's what makes the listener lose themselves in the music. For instance, if you listened to Chopin's Étude Op. 10 No. 3 or "Tristesse", even though there are no words and no back up instrumentation....you can feel the pain of the composer, his homesickness, his longing. The melody by itself should convey this magic, these emotions, and then lyrics would just bring it home. My suggestion would be just listen to your instrumentals (melody), and see if you feel what you want your song to convey. If you feel it, then add the lyrics to enhance it. Your singing style also helps bring out the magic in the song, and I personally think you're a good singer. The same criteria that apply for a melody apply to singing style as well. In other words, what you're feeling while you're writing/singing your music, your listener should feel the same when they hear it. I hear some Prince inspiration in "I Like"... Very nice. And the piano on "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" was just divine. I sense a sorta classical style/jazz feel with the piano and it just gives the song a new direction than say Judy Garland's musical-style version. The harmony of voices was top notch. Nice interpretation of a classic I say.
Hope I made sense. If I didn't I apologize. But you have real potential. Keep at it.  You're music is very good! Thanks for sharing it, I enjoyed listening to it MJ L.O.V.E: https://www.facebook.com/...689&type=2 / YOUTUBE: http://www.youtube.com/us...nderSilent | |
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pepper7 said: Very good.
Nice and mellow and my fav is 'i like' That sounds very P influenced to me!!! Thx pepper | |
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NaughtyKitty said: SherryJackson said: Wow.....
You have an amazing funk sound to your music. I feel it's retrospective, but has a modern feel. Your bass and organ are simply fantastic. I love a heavy bass in music. But I feel there's something missing....I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe the word "missing" isn't the proper word. It's there, but it's not coming thru as best as it can be. It's the magic. See, every memorable, beautiful song as a soul and magical quality about it. It's what makes or breaks a song, it's what gives it's beauty and immortality, it's what makes the listener lose themselves in the music. For instance, if you listened to Chopin's Étude Op. 10 No. 3 or "Tristesse", even though there are no words and no back up instrumentation....you can feel the pain of the composer, his homesickness, his longing. The melody by itself should convey this magic, these emotions, and then lyrics would just bring it home. My suggestion would be just listen to your instrumentals (melody), and see if you feel what you want your song to convey. If you feel it, then add the lyrics to enhance it. Your singing style also helps bring out the magic in the song, and I personally think you're a good singer. The same criteria that apply for a melody apply to singing style as well. In other words, what you're feeling while you're writing/singing your music, your listener should feel the same when they hear it. I hear some Prince inspiration in "I Like"... Very nice. And the piano on "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" was just divine. I sense a sorta classical style/jazz feel with the piano and it just gives the song a new direction than say Judy Garland's musical-style version. The harmony of voices was top notch. Nice interpretation of a classic I say.
Hope I made sense. If I didn't I apologize. But you have real potential. Keep at it. You're music is very good! Thanks for sharing it, I enjoyed listening to it Thank u | |
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i like it bro your pretty good but i would like to see a more uptempo ass shaker songs, something to dance to. keep up the good work [Edited 5/18/10 5:45am] | |
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PicklesMcMillan said: i like it bro your pretty good but i would like to see a more uptempo ass shaker songs, something to dance to. keep up the good work
[Edited 5/18/10 5:45am] Thanx so much | |
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I have yet to form an opinion regarding your music.I took a listen yesterday and I like it but I don't think I can offer any real constructive critisism.Keep up the good work! | |
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camrod66 said: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1006151 LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK
I like it I emailed it to someone I know. If you need a dedicated guitarist of any genre please let me in. | |
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levis1 said: camrod66 said: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1006151 LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK
Heck yea I need a guitarist!! Lets make it happen!! I like it I emailed it to someone I know. If you need a dedicated guitarist of any genre please let me in. | |
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