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You Are Where I Start - Dave YOU ARE WHERE I START
The past is gone, the future long I'll start again with open arms This one will laugh, this one will sing This one will cherish all I bring She'll always know which way to go even if I'm not there to show Ooh, ahh - You are where I start. This one will take, this one will give This one will cherish how I choose to live This one won't cry, she'll always smile This one would never let me die Day or night - make me feel all right This one would never - ever! - leave my side Ooh, ahh - You are where I start. Inspire my mind and cleanse my soul Guard every way I choose to go She'll pray with me, she'll let me see That love is all that makes us free Won't worry 'bout tomorrow, won't worry 'bout today I'm safe, 'cause life is a game we play Ooh, ahh - You are where I start! And I won't sleep, and I won't eat 'cause she is all that I will need Let tears alloy to tears of joy Which will never cease to exist All my life have I been blind? Feels like I'm in love for the very first time (Never cease to exist, never cease to exist, ...) Feels like this is all that I missed. Ooh, ahh, you are where I start Ooh, ahh, you are where I start Start. The quality somehow got really crap after I uploaded it, with all those bloody halts in the audio file. But I hope you still get the picture of what this song should/could sound like and I would appreciate you giving me your opinion about it! Thank you. | |
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And, by the way, I'm sorry about all those picture of myself in there, I just clicked at some file without nude pictures in it to fill the blackness of the screen. | |
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Dave1992 said: YOU ARE WHERE I START
The past is gone, the future long I'll start again with open arms This one will laugh, this one will sing This one will cherish all I bring She'll always know which way to go even if I'm not there to show Ooh, ahh - You are where I start. This one will take, this one will give This one will cherish how I choose to live This one won't cry, she'll always smile This one would never let me die Day or night - make me feel all right This one would never - ever! - leave my side Ooh, ahh - You are where I start. Inspire my mind and cleanse my soul Guard every way I choose to go She'll pray with me, she'll let me see That love is all that makes us free Won't worry 'bout tomorrow, won't worry 'bout today I'm safe, 'cause life is a game we play Ooh, ahh - You are where I start! And I won't sleep, and I won't eat 'cause she is all that I will need Let tears alloy to tears of joy Which will never cease to exist All my life have I been blind? Feels like I'm in love for the very first time (Never cease to exist, never cease to exist, ...) Feels like this is all that I missed. Ooh, ahh, you are where I start Ooh, ahh, you are where I start Start. The quality somehow got really crap after I uploaded it, with all those bloody halts in the audio file. But I hope you still get the picture of what this song should/could sound like and I would appreciate you giving me your opinion about it! Thank you. I like the concept and your song "You are where I start" It's a beautiful depiction of what we all can relate too. And by the way, i like all the pictures of you! Thanks for sharing! | |
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Thank you. | |
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Very nice Dave, you've got a great voice! | |
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MacDaddy said: Very nice Dave, you've got a great voice!
Cheers, mate! | |
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I'd definitely do the guy with the toothbrush, but the others are a bit 'meh' | |
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vivid said: I'd definitely do the guy with the toothbrush, but the others are a bit 'meh'
Co-sign. | |
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Dave1992 said: vivid said: I'd definitely do the guy with the toothbrush, but the others are a bit 'meh'
Co-sign. Now that's what I call a party! | |
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MacDaddy said: Very nice Dave, you've got a great voice!
His voice is pure heaven | |
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Aelis said: MacDaddy said: Very nice Dave, you've got a great voice!
His voice is pure heaven Totally agreed. Your voice is very engaging. Not sure how many songs you've written but I'd definitely like to hear more. | |
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Aelis said: MacDaddy said: Very nice Dave, you've got a great voice!
His voice is pure heaven | |
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Dave1992 said: Aelis said: His voice is pure heaven It really is | |
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Fenwick said: Aelis said: His voice is pure heaven Totally agreed. Your voice is very engaging. Not sure how many songs you've written but I'd definitely like to hear more. Thank you! Yes, there are more songs, but the recording quality is not perfect and my singing is really crappy and sloppy from time to time, as I didn't take enough time to record them properly... | |
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