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Thread started 04/29/10 8:25am

Dave1992

You Are Where I Start - Dave

YOU ARE WHERE I START

The past is gone, the future long
I'll start again with open arms
This one will laugh, this one will sing
This one will cherish all I bring
She'll always know which way to go
even if I'm not there to show

Ooh, ahh - You are where I start.

This one will take, this one will give
This one will cherish how I choose to live
This one won't cry, she'll always smile
This one would never let me die
Day or night - make me feel all right
This one would never - ever! - leave my side

Ooh, ahh - You are where I start.

Inspire my mind and cleanse my soul
Guard every way I choose to go
She'll pray with me, she'll let me see
That love is all that makes us free
Won't worry 'bout tomorrow, won't worry 'bout today
I'm safe, 'cause life is a game we play

Ooh, ahh - You are where I start!

And I won't sleep, and I won't eat
'cause she is all that I will need
Let tears alloy to tears of joy
Which will never cease to exist
All my life have I been blind?
Feels like I'm in love for the very first time

(Never cease to exist, never cease to exist, ...)

Feels like this is all that I missed.

Ooh, ahh, you are where I start
Ooh, ahh, you are where I start

Start.











The quality somehow got really crap after I uploaded it, with all those bloody halts in the audio file. confused

But I hope you still get the picture of what this song should/could sound like and I would appreciate you giving me your opinion about it!



Thank you.
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Reply #1 posted 04/29/10 8:31am

Dave1992

And, by the way, I'm sorry about all those picture of myself in there, I just clicked at some file without nude pictures in it to fill the blackness of the screen. neutral
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Reply #2 posted 04/29/10 10:34am

N2thelight

Dave1992 said:

YOU ARE WHERE I START

The past is gone, the future long
I'll start again with open arms
This one will laugh, this one will sing
This one will cherish all I bring
She'll always know which way to go
even if I'm not there to show

Ooh, ahh - You are where I start.

This one will take, this one will give
This one will cherish how I choose to live
This one won't cry, she'll always smile
This one would never let me die
Day or night - make me feel all right
This one would never - ever! - leave my side

Ooh, ahh - You are where I start.

Inspire my mind and cleanse my soul
Guard every way I choose to go
She'll pray with me, she'll let me see
That love is all that makes us free
Won't worry 'bout tomorrow, won't worry 'bout today
I'm safe, 'cause life is a game we play

Ooh, ahh - You are where I start!

And I won't sleep, and I won't eat
'cause she is all that I will need
Let tears alloy to tears of joy
Which will never cease to exist
All my life have I been blind?
Feels like I'm in love for the very first time

(Never cease to exist, never cease to exist, ...)

Feels like this is all that I missed.

Ooh, ahh, you are where I start
Ooh, ahh, you are where I start

Start.











The quality somehow got really crap after I uploaded it, with all those bloody halts in the audio file. confused

But I hope you still get the picture of what this song should/could sound like and I would appreciate you giving me your opinion about it!



Thank you.

I like the concept and your song "You are where I start" It's a beautiful depiction of what we all can relate too.

And by the way, i like all the pictures of you! smile Thanks for sharing!


dove
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Reply #3 posted 04/29/10 10:59am

Dave1992

Thank you.
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Reply #4 posted 05/05/10 4:57am

MacDaddy

Very nice Dave, you've got a great voice!
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Reply #5 posted 05/05/10 5:22am

Dave1992

MacDaddy said:

Very nice Dave, you've got a great voice!


Cheers, mate!
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Reply #6 posted 05/05/10 6:53am

vivid

I'd definitely do the guy with the toothbrush, but the others are a bit 'meh'
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Reply #7 posted 05/05/10 7:05am

Dave1992

vivid said:

I'd definitely do the guy with the toothbrush, but the others are a bit 'meh'


Co-sign.
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Reply #8 posted 05/05/10 7:29am

vivid

Dave1992 said:

vivid said:

I'd definitely do the guy with the toothbrush, but the others are a bit 'meh'


Co-sign.


Now that's what I call a party! wink
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Reply #9 posted 05/05/10 11:39am

Aelis

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MacDaddy said:

Very nice Dave, you've got a great voice!


nod His voice is pure heaven
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Reply #10 posted 05/06/10 4:44am

Fenwick

Aelis said:

MacDaddy said:

Very nice Dave, you've got a great voice!


nod His voice is pure heaven


Totally agreed.

Your voice is very engaging.

Not sure how many songs you've written but I'd definitely like to hear more.
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Reply #11 posted 05/07/10 12:57am

Dave1992

Aelis said:

MacDaddy said:

Very nice Dave, you've got a great voice!


nod His voice is pure heaven


touched
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Reply #12 posted 05/07/10 7:21am

Aelis

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Dave1992 said:

Aelis said:



nod His voice is pure heaven


touched


It really is mushy
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Reply #13 posted 05/08/10 1:22pm

kimrachell

biggrin
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Reply #14 posted 05/08/10 1:28pm

Dave1992

Fenwick said:

Aelis said:



nod His voice is pure heaven


Totally agreed.

Your voice is very engaging.

Not sure how many songs you've written but I'd definitely like to hear more.


Thank you!


Yes, there are more songs, but the recording quality is not perfect and my singing is really crappy and sloppy from time to time, as I didn't take enough time to record them properly...
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