What about this?

http://tinypic.com/player...v8ha10&s=6

I call it Lemon Popsicle. I have some lyrics in mind, and they're all basically smutty entendres about cock-sucking.

If anybody thinks it's any good, I'll carry on with it. Otherwise, I'll junk it.

L-E-M
O-N-P
O-P-S
I-C-L-E

L-E-M
O-N-P
O-P-S
I-C-L-E

In the game of love
2 get ahead, U gotta get down
Kisses ain't enough
U gotta wear me like a crown

Baby needs a pacifier!
It's rude 2 talk with your mouth full
No need to look me in the eye-ah
Lick the lemon popsicle

L-E-M
O-N-P
O-P-S
I-C-L-E

L-E-M
O-N-P
O-P-S
I-C-L-E

Etcetera.

Actually, I've decided to call it 'Purple Popsicle'. I'm going to try and finish it over the next two weeks. Yay!!!

I like the drums, and I like some of the synth instruments, but the melody seems a bit wild- the notes are out of key with one another. But that might be what you're going for, I don't know. I'm more of a melody-harmony type of cat myself. But I do like the drums. I can hear the Linn in there.

JDODSON said:

It's intentional. Believe me, it "follows the rules" musically, but I'll admit it's a little jarring - and there's not much space for many other notes. I always loved how the bass in 'Eye No' seems to be in a completely different key to whatever else was happening. It'll make more sense once the vocals are on.

I was half-joking about the lyrics, by the way. I just needed guide lyrics so I could remember the melody and rhythm.

no snare?