A friend of mine is rapping on these two videos. If you do not mind, comment and give some constructive criticism(comment on the video itself if possible and not here).He wrote the songs himself.

Every Time - Jr Loc
http://www.youtube.com/wa...TlsxwKIqzM
Baby I Protect Her - Jr Loc
http://www.youtube.com/wa...e-rPeOJkpo

I don't have a Youtube account but I'll comment here. I like the sample & the beat used on "Every Time".IMO, he should get someone to sing the hook on the track. Rapping reminds means me abit of MF Doom on this track.Another good beat on "Baby I Protect Her" too. Did your friend make these beats or is he just rapping over them?.