i'm all fucked up niggas
how could i fool you
where do i begin
i aint good for too-much else
this is where it all ends
any promise i've ever shown
was known solely
by these quotes
that most dont bother to note
really tho, i hate to bitch
but how would i cope?
without you who has never spoke (-)
never wrote
never called
never promised to do nothin at all
and yet i fall into ya arms fully
i know alotta cats beef just to eat
but im no bully-
never have been (-)
well damn how do i splash then
swore i was heavy
til a nigga tried to cash in
and strangely enough, im seein niggas just like me
really, just like me
same thoughts on the scene
woulda swore im almost there
listenin to my dreams
but nah i know the truth nigga
seen
what i may have in passion
i'm lackin in drive
which is in a sin if you intended to thrive
no why?
for every action theres a reaction
and inaction is relapsin
to anyone addicted to lies
that we tell ourselves (shit)
im tryna smell myself
dont let me lose you
i swear ta god its like i have a disease
for every good move i make
i shoot myself in the knees
so im crippled even when i succeed
what is that tho huh?
(-)
yeah thats me in a nutshell
2 steps foreward
1 back
but i bust well (-)
loose breaths
killing me softly
like auntie didn't warn me
bout sippin that coffee
and i can hear my girl already
like "baby, hold steady"
but we only one year in the game
so the question is
if im still strugglin
2 years later
will she start sayin my full name?
you know the way it goes (-)
you know the logic of those
that some souls know solely
as hoes
im sayin tho
yo
my muse changes so quick
that whenever im called upon
its hard to do shit (shhh)
its alot
or maybe its a little
but i cant process it
whatever
god bless it
had to throw that in
like a bottle wit a message
but there i go dreamin again
schemin again (-)

so if this is ya first time hearin me
know that i put heart into all that i start(-)
in this untitled journey
that i seek to impart
better known as my life in the arts
and for whoever it benefits
if anyone
anyone of these is written for you
cuz truth be told i dont know no more
what good it wit do
real talk im just tryna through

Its pretty good. I have to say tho that there is something about how the flow of the lyrical beat and the flow of the melodic beat that seems a miss.. cant put my finger on it, I may show it to a couple of my friends.. and I will get back to you on it... always is it good to get many opinions..

you have a nice voice btw.

SilentSkys said:

I disagree about the lyrical beat/flow/melodic comment you made. I think it's a perfect track for a day like today (Earth Day), because I hear you getting down to it...Earth, that is. Plus, I like the laid back vibe - it serves as a good background to the verse. But from what I have heard in your other songs, it could be that I connect with your style.

thanks guys!