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ABSTRACTIVE VIEWS ABSTRACTIVE VIEWS
(Another Point of U) I saw U on the radio U were swimmin' through a cloud; I'd like 2 C U all alone But you're always in a crowd. If I could be a Million Men I'd rather be the 1; Who rises with the moon in you Like the early midnight sun. If we were born like Siamese Twins Bonded 2 each other, I'd never be apart from U, I'll always be your brother. So, if you think I'm outta touch, Then feel the need in me; I really Love U very much As any blind man can see.... Written, Produced, Arranged, Composed, and Performed by: bridge [Edited 4/15/09 18:45pm] comobridge | |
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bridge said: ABSTRACTIVE VIEWS
(Another Point of U) I saw U on the radio U were swimmin' through a cloud; I'd like 2 C U all alone But you're always in a crowd. If I could be a Million Men I'd rather be the 1; Who rises with the moon in you Like the early midnight sun. If we were born like Siamese Twins Bonded 2 each other other, I'd never be apart from U, I'll always be your brother. So, if you think I'm outta touch, Then feel the need in me; I really Love U very much As any blind man can see.... Written, Produced, Arranged, Composed, and Performed by: bridge I loved it well done! | |
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Very nice, bridge. | |
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That's a beautiful poem...eye particularly liked lines 5 & 6 
Hope u post more! U should write 1 about his music...eye myself have attempted it but it's SO hard 2 rhyme and 2 make sense.  [Edited 4/26/09 14:38pm] | |
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