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FEEDBACK ON MY MUSIC.(this thread is broken) .. http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK,JUST STARTED MAKING MUSIC 5 MONTHS AGO AND JUST WANTED SOME FEEDBACK TO SEE IF I HAD SOMETHING OR NOT http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling
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You guys gotta take a listen to this....
HOTT!! HOTT!! HOTT!!  | |
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pippet said: You guys gotta take a listen to this....
HOTT!! HOTT!! HOTT!! I agree Roderick you're BAD! Something's wrong is very nice. The instruments used and the vocals are very good. Clever arrangement and good use of space. I would suggest just adding some synths in the background..but that's about it. I heard Pretty Girls and Think I'd suggest changing up the vocals and use a deeper range on those tracks as the beat kinda takes over the falcetto. Higher is right too! I'd cover that one with the quickness! Rhythm Within almost reminds me on Monie Love  Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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paisleypark4 said: pippet said: You guys gotta take a listen to this....
HOTT!! HOTT!! HOTT!! I agree Roderick you're BAD! Something's wrong is very nice. The instruments used and the vocals are very good. Clever arrangement and good use of space. I would suggest just adding some synths in the background..but that's about it. I heard Pretty Girls and Think I'd suggest changing up the vocals and use a deeper range on those tracks as the beat kinda takes over the falcetto. Higher is right too! I'd cover that one with the quickness! Rhythm Within almost reminds me on Monie Love thank you and i am gonna change those vocals also.....thanx 4 the feedback | |
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'Somethings Wrong' - I love the vocals, very nice. Cool rhythm, very Prince-like, if you don't mind me comparing.
I'm not fond of the keyboard sound choice, but that's just my taste  | |
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HeavenlyB said: 'Somethings Wrong' - I love the vocals, very nice. Cool rhythm, very Prince-like, if you don't mind me comparing.
I'm not fond of the keyboard sound choice, but that's just my taste thank you for the feedback its really cool of you...i am gonna work harder and get better watch.....have a great day | |
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It should only be about what you think is right for your music. Never try to please other with your artwork because each has their own unique taste and you can't satisfy all.
I believe you have a great talent. The rhythm is unique a d the vocal arrangement and performance is impressive. I know from being a sound engineer that it's not simple to get a singer to do those right, especially if they try it without a producer. | |
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HeavenlyB said: It should only be about what you think is right for your music. Never try to please other with your artwork because each has their own unique taste and you can't satisfy all.
I believe you have a great talent. The rhythm is unique a d the vocal arrangement and performance is impressive. I know from being a sound engineer that it's not simple to get a singer to do those right, especially if they try it without a producer. yea i have been doing this for right at 5 months so hopefully it improves as time goes on,i dont read music and i am trying to teach myself to play piano,guitar and bass so yes i do have a ways to go.....and again thanx for your time and feedback thats gonna help me quite a bit | |
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hot shit! Sounds Awesome!!
Good work! If anything, I wanted to hear the lead vocals louder and a little clearer, especially on the first two songs, but that's it. I think you are doing great so far!!!!! I would put this on my iPod fer sure! "Hyperactive when I was small, Hyperactive now I'm grown, Hyperactive 'till I'm dead and gone"
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Nice!!! Say it's just a dream...
U open up ur eyes and come 2 realize u simply imagined this So u lean over and give her a kiss Here on earth, here on earth, with u it's not so bad Here on earth, here on earth eye don't feel so sad Stay right here |
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You've got some nice grooves going on all those tracks, thanks for sharing!  "I would say that Prince's top thirty percent is great. Of that thirty percent, I'll bet the public has heard twenty percent of it." - Susan Rogers, "Hunting for Prince's Vault", BBC, 2015 |
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You're not bad at all, keep it up! You've got some songwriting chops going on that I don't have, and I've been (trying) to do it for close to 20 years now. Damn!
I'd suggest cleaning up your vocal tracks - I realize these songs are demos, and that's cool, I'd just like to hear your vox not be so mushy. You got a lot closer with "Sista Neish"'es vocals (she also is really talented!). Your harmonies are really spot-on. More real guitar and bass are going to make your music that much better. Can't wait to hear what you do next | |
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| I'll take a full listen after work, but so far, so good! follow me on twitter - Lovenharmony1 aka @DAPfan2c | |
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I really like your work  | |
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thats tight bra
i really dig "somethings wrong" [Edited 4/14/09 14:18pm] | |
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booty said: thats tight bra
i really dig "somethings wrong"thank u so much [Edited 4/14/09 14:18pm] | |
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camrod66 said: booty said: thats tight bra
i really dig "somethings wrong"thank u so much [Edited 4/14/09 14:18pm] MissDeeDeeDee | |
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very good man  | |
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pretty bad ass man, way to go . great vocals & cool sounds. I dig | |
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some reminds me a bit of 1999ish funk. Good job! brickhouse boys: http://www.myspace.com/brickhouseboys
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zachypoo said: some reminds me a bit of 1999ish funk. Good job!
thank you | |
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It's really cool. I didn't expect much, but I like it. | |
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graecophilos said: It's really cool. I didn't expect much, but I like it.
thank you..... | |
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Great Music!!!!! | |
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damn... that's pretty good. you have talent.
pretty girls is actually my fave. i love the rhythm and the lyrics. the multi-voice layer is really nice, and i enjoy the simplicity of the music itself. it sounds like a clever robin thicke type song. if you e-mail me mp3s, i would love to ipod these. let me know if you don't mind mailing, and i will orgnote you my e-mail address. Power tends to corrupt; absolute power corrupts absolutely. - Lord Acton | |
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cborgman said: damn... that's pretty good. you have talent.
pretty girls is actually my fave. i love the rhythm and the lyrics. the multi-voice layer is really nice, and i enjoy the simplicity of the music itself. it sounds like a clever robin thicke type song. if you e-mail me mp3s, i would love to ipod these. let me know if you don't mind mailing, and i will orgnote you my e-mail address. i dont mind at all.i am almost done with them and will send them to you....thanx | |
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Your music is VERY cool 
Good job. |
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Not bad
The first song was FUNKY... and I like the vibe for all the others. I dig had 2 run away... pride was 2 strong. It started raining, baby, the birds were gone | |
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camrod66 said: .. http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK,JUST STARTED MAKING MUSIC 5 MONTHS AGO AND JUST WANTED SOME FEEDBACK TO SEE IF I HAD SOMETHING OR NOT http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling
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DreamyPopRoyalty said: Not bad
The first song was FUNKY... and I like the vibe for all the others. I dig thank you | |
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