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Thread started 03/30/09 1:42pm

camrod66

FEEDBACK ON MY MUSIC.(this thread is broken)

.. http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK,JUST STARTED MAKING MUSIC 5 MONTHS AGO AND JUST WANTED SOME FEEDBACK TO SEE IF I HAD SOMETHING OR NOT http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling
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Reply #1 posted 03/30/09 2:13pm

pippet

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You guys gotta take a listen to this....

HOTT!! HOTT!! HOTT!!

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Reply #2 posted 04/01/09 5:37pm

paisleypark4

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pippet said:

You guys gotta take a listen to this....

HOTT!! HOTT!! HOTT!!

rose


I agree Roderick you're BAD!

Something's wrong is very nice. The instruments used and the vocals are very good. Clever arrangement and good use of space. I would suggest just adding some synths in the background..but that's about it.
I heard Pretty Girls and Think I'd suggest changing up the vocals and use a deeper range on those tracks as the beat kinda takes over the falcetto. Higher is right too! I'd cover that one with the quickness!
Rhythm Within almost reminds me on Monie Love nod
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Reply #3 posted 04/02/09 12:17pm

camrod66

paisleypark4 said:

pippet said:

You guys gotta take a listen to this....

HOTT!! HOTT!! HOTT!!

rose


I agree Roderick you're BAD!

Something's wrong is very nice. The instruments used and the vocals are very good. Clever arrangement and good use of space. I would suggest just adding some synths in the background..but that's about it.
I heard Pretty Girls and Think I'd suggest changing up the vocals and use a deeper range on those tracks as the beat kinda takes over the falcetto. Higher is right too! I'd cover that one with the quickness!
Rhythm Within almost reminds me on Monie Love nod

thank you and i am gonna change those vocals also.....thanx 4 the feedback
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Reply #4 posted 04/08/09 9:00am

HeavenlyB

'Somethings Wrong' - I love the vocals, very nice. Cool rhythm, very Prince-like, if you don't mind me comparing.
I'm not fond of the keyboard sound choice, but that's just my taste smile
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Reply #5 posted 04/08/09 4:45pm

camrod66

HeavenlyB said:

'Somethings Wrong' - I love the vocals, very nice. Cool rhythm, very Prince-like, if you don't mind me comparing.
I'm not fond of the keyboard sound choice, but that's just my taste smile

thank you for the feedback its really cool of you...i am gonna work harder and get better watch.....have a great day
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Reply #6 posted 04/08/09 4:54pm

HeavenlyB

It should only be about what you think is right for your music. Never try to please other with your artwork because each has their own unique taste and you can't satisfy all. smile

I believe you have a great talent. The rhythm is unique a d the vocal arrangement and performance is impressive. I know from being a sound engineer that it's not simple to get a singer to do those right, especially if they try it without a producer.
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Reply #7 posted 04/08/09 7:39pm

camrod66

HeavenlyB said:

It should only be about what you think is right for your music. Never try to please other with your artwork because each has their own unique taste and you can't satisfy all. smile

I believe you have a great talent. The rhythm is unique a d the vocal arrangement and performance is impressive. I know from being a sound engineer that it's not simple to get a singer to do those right, especially if they try it without a producer.

yea i have been doing this for right at 5 months so hopefully it improves as time goes on,i dont read music and i am trying to teach myself to play piano,guitar and bass so yes i do have a ways to go.....and again thanx for your time and feedback thats gonna help me quite a bit
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Reply #8 posted 04/09/09 8:03pm

chewymusic

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hot shit! Sounds Awesome!! music
Good work! If anything, I wanted to hear
the lead vocals louder and a little clearer,
especially on the first two songs, but that's it.
I think you are doing great so far!!!!!
I would put this on my iPod fer sure! music nod
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Reply #9 posted 04/11/09 2:59pm

amorbella

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Nice!!!
Say it's just a dream...
U open up ur eyes and come 2 realize
u simply imagined this
So u lean over and give her a kiss
Here on earth, here on earth,
with u it's not so bad
Here on earth, here on earth
eye don't feel so sad
Stay right here
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Reply #10 posted 04/11/09 4:41pm

CandaceS

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You've got some nice grooves going on all those tracks, thanks for sharing! cool
"I would say that Prince's top thirty percent is great. Of that thirty percent, I'll bet the public has heard twenty percent of it." - Susan Rogers, "Hunting for Prince's Vault", BBC, 2015
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Reply #11 posted 04/14/09 2:37am

abigail05

You're not bad at all, keep it up! You've got some songwriting chops going on that I don't have, and I've been (trying) to do it for close to 20 years now. Damn!

I'd suggest cleaning up your vocal tracks - I realize these songs are demos, and that's cool, I'd just like to hear your vox not be so mushy. You got a lot closer with "Sista Neish"'es vocals (she also is really talented!). Your harmonies are really spot-on.

More real guitar and bass are going to make your music that much better. Can't wait to hear what you do next
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Reply #12 posted 04/14/09 6:45am

dartluv5

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cool I'll take a full listen after work, but so far, so good!
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Reply #13 posted 04/14/09 10:15am

missjay23

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I really like your work music thumbs up!
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Reply #14 posted 04/14/09 2:15pm

booty

thats tight bra
i really dig "somethings wrong"
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Reply #15 posted 04/14/09 3:05pm

camrod66

booty said:

thats tight bra
i really dig "somethings wrong"thank u so much
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Reply #16 posted 04/14/09 4:46pm

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camrod66 said:

booty said:

thats tight bra
i really dig "somethings wrong"thank u so much
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You have a really sexy groove going,and a beautiful voice. I wish you much success. Ithnik we ll be hearing good things about you soon....
MissDeeDeeDee
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Reply #17 posted 04/15/09 10:24am

Vinniecent

very good man wink
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Reply #18 posted 04/16/09 5:03pm

nosajd

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pretty bad ass man, way to go . great vocals & cool sounds. I dig
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Reply #19 posted 04/16/09 7:58pm

zachypoo

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some reminds me a bit of 1999ish funk. Good job!
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Reply #20 posted 04/17/09 3:38pm

camrod66

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some reminds me a bit of 1999ish funk. Good job!

thank you
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Reply #21 posted 04/18/09 1:00pm

graecophilos

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It's really cool. I didn't expect much, but I like it.
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Reply #22 posted 04/18/09 3:58pm

camrod66

graecophilos said:

It's really cool. I didn't expect much, but I like it.

thank you.....
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Reply #23 posted 04/18/09 5:24pm

ReginaCarman

Great Music!!!!! smile
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Reply #24 posted 04/18/09 11:38pm

cborgman

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damn... that's pretty good. you have talent.

pretty girls is actually my fave. i love the rhythm and the lyrics. the multi-voice layer is really nice, and i enjoy the simplicity of the music itself. it sounds like a clever robin thicke type song.

if you e-mail me mp3s, i would love to ipod these. let me know if you don't mind mailing, and i will orgnote you my e-mail address.
liars gonna lie, frauds gonna fraud.
but its a joy to call them out on their bullshit.
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Reply #25 posted 04/18/09 11:40pm

camrod66

cborgman said:

damn... that's pretty good. you have talent.

pretty girls is actually my fave. i love the rhythm and the lyrics. the multi-voice layer is really nice, and i enjoy the simplicity of the music itself. it sounds like a clever robin thicke type song.

if you e-mail me mp3s, i would love to ipod these. let me know if you don't mind mailing, and i will orgnote you my e-mail address.

i dont mind at all.i am almost done with them and will send them to you....thanx
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Reply #26 posted 04/18/09 11:56pm

Alej

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Your music is VERY cool biggrin

Good job.
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Reply #27 posted 04/19/09 12:03am

DreamyPopRoyal
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Not bad cool

The first song was FUNKY... and I like the vibe for all the others. I dig cool
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Reply #28 posted 04/19/09 12:05am

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camrod66 said:

.. http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK,JUST STARTED MAKING MUSIC 5 MONTHS AGO AND JUST WANTED SOME FEEDBACK TO SEE IF I HAD SOMETHING OR NOT http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling
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well love got what u whant love for shure in jesus name love so to tell u like they did it has ahll ready been done love cause ahll this remids me of prince the singer in this with u in ahlot of ways peace love
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Reply #29 posted 04/19/09 2:22am

camrod66

DreamyPopRoyalty said:

Not bad cool

The first song was FUNKY... and I like the vibe for all the others. I dig cool

thank you biggrin
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