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poem:untitled(please leave feedback) she's the theme of dreams
the source of gleams a light that burns the curse a sight 2 bring a verse.. never could this be worng.. weather sings our song.. rain2rise our rose snow 4bliss composed. shes the end 2 sorrow shes the whim of 2morrow.. premier 2 feel this color a tear 2 hold a lover.. the ring 2 bless a hand.. a scene for hope's expand.. her eyes with lucent wax.. the sky 2 send the facts.. a sign that she's the star.. a pine that leads bizzare.. insane about her mind.. insane about her heart.. abstained to look behind.. sustained 2 hear a harp.. she's the ballad on piano's played a valid 2 why i'm saved.. shes's the cause 2build a man.. the fall of evil's stand.. ..In her chills, I'll force a burst..Erotic thrills, so good, it hurts..My motions 2 her velvet, she'll strike it as love..Rain from her pelvis..ended with doves.. | |
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it's nice but just know that it doesn't have 2 rhyme to be called a poem. I find things have more feeling to them if it doesn't rhyme but mayb that is just me.
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sometimes yes, sometimes no. this one's got nice flow, and I think it wouldn't be the same...
missmad said: it's nice but just know that it doesn't have 2 rhyme to be called a poem. I find things have more feeling to them if it doesn't rhyme but mayb that is just me.
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eaglebear4839 said: sometimes yes, sometimes no. this one's got nice flow, and I think it wouldn't be the same...
missmad said: it's nice but just know that it doesn't have 2 rhyme to be called a poem. I find things have more feeling to them if it doesn't rhyme but mayb that is just me.
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