Demo stages
I wasn't gonna let it out until I finished cleaning up the vocals, But lord knows when I'll have access to a Neuman U87 mic again, so enjoy it now
Cause i'll most likely have to re-record on my shitty AKGs (compared to the neuman)
melody is kinda bouncy round the second verse and bridge
because I actually wrote those part on my way to the vocal session, and was still feeling out the melody,
and I hate melodyne/Autotune, so I chose not to fuck with it

http://www.icompositions....sid=100902

I've been away with my family this week and have had very little computer
access, in addition to crappy access...I'll listen when I return in a few days.

I'm excited to see you're still working on your music!

Very nice ballad EW...

Now if there really is a gal in Memphis, maybe it's time to find her.

This has a lot of heart in it.

obsessed said:

Been there...
She's taken...
them the breaks

I'm gonna die alone on a stack of comic books,
least i'll never get writers block...

DevinDevin said:

I thought so, lyrically wise, probably my better ones,
Don't know what to do with the arangement tho...
I kinda stole the idea from a Ryan Adams tune (Yah i'm still into him, check the song actually it's called stop http://www.youtube.com/wa...WEFv_gMxE)
his is infinitely better than mines, which is a pale carbon copy
thnx for replying nonetheless!

EmbattledWarrior said:

Thanks for that link that was a good song. I like both... I wouldn't call yours a cheap carbon copy lol. You made it your own.

sweet ballad...
...would love to hear the cleaned version.

EmbattledWarrior said:

gostei do tema This House Is Not For Sale

Nice man. I like where it is going. I have to admit I was not a fan of the vocals ..I know its just a demo so I wont fault you. There is a high amount of vulnerability. I think you should not 'fake' the emotion in the song..reach out and really FEEL what you are saying. You should lash out and practice within and test out different ways to sing this song with different conflictions within the lyrics.