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As Miserable As You I wrote this a couple months ago, just as jotted notes after an English class, and gave it a first draft last night. It's still a work in progress, and I'm looking for some feedback on how to give it more clarity while keeping its (sarcastic?) tone:
As Miserable As You - by Eagle Bear If we had The right to marry We wouldn't be as queer Nor so merry We wouldn't be so D.I.N.K.y So then our cash Would go to our kids Not on the next gay bash We'd have less fun Overall, just like you Let the boss conscript us both And do patriotic, too Give us this one thing And then we'll be miserable Unless you just want To suffer indivisible? | |
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