So me and my band have put a perfectly nice track together. The music tells a lot by it self, but need serious lyrics. So if anyone here are great lyric writers we would like your help.

The lyrics have to be:
- about leaving it all behind, and going all alone (to the unknown) to learn about life

- serious

- maybe sorrowfull (tired of the society, rules etc.)

- And poetic/Philosophic

This is a slow rock/blues song. 4 further details or if you have anything which might help, orgnote me and i will reply as fast as i can.

Mstar
[Edited 11/12/08 6:51am]

Always Dreamin' 'bout Makin' This World A Better Place
Without No Abortions, Religions Or Neglection
Or Discrimination Because Of Sex Or Race
What We Need Is A World With Contra Deception
Instead Of Contra Ception.
What's Up In This World When People Can't Show Their Affection
Cause They Ain't Deemed Hot Enough?
The Say I Look Like A Girl, U Ever Seen A Girl Look So Tough?
People Hate Me Cause They Take My Stuff Way 2 Literally
They Can't Handle Me Cause They Ain't Got No Imagination Of Their Own
Yeah, What's A Farmer Gotta Do After The Seeds Are Sown
They Ain't Givin' A Child Time 2 Grow, They Gon' Reap Just What They Sow
What We Need Is Not Physical Love
What We Need Is Not Platonic Love
What We Need Is Unconditional Love

But Since We Won't Ever Get None, I Call This Life Done
I Don't Care What U Think About Me Whether U Live In Miami Or Compton
So Goodbye, Maybe we'll Meet Again B4 I Die
[Edited 11/12/08 11:58am]

I write better after listening to music. Got a link?

PREACHA said:

Well unfortunatly, we have not recorded it yet as we don't have any lyrics yet. hehe but i will certainly keep you in mind and ask the band if we could record then i will deffo send a link. Thanks anyway 4 your attention.

If u don't like my first lyrics, define me what you are looking for.