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what du think?? i wrote this at the start of the month, just wondered what u think,
song 1 Candles, tasteful blues, woman singing her soul out through her voice but still as our eyes meet its not enough rotating the room passing only once, nothing but a see through glance u cant have seen me romance filling the room a glance away across the room romance leaving through the glass door full of desperation announcing to myself how stupid can i be a glance a stare but still my shoulder a touch his skin touching my second hand suit i turn hes there and it must be truer the lovers say love at first sight a turn away a glance away a look at touch but still the lovers say love at first sight song 2 questions so many ways of answering them complicating the result leaves you with no answers should i move on should i stay behind am i happy or just scared of whats to come am i ready yet to go to a place where the the anwers arent clear and im not sure what questions i'll be asking but staying in one place wont get me any where and moving on will be a task but in the end whats the point in staying put when ur uncontrollably unhappy when the guy who feeds you and puts the wadge in ur pocket is an egotistical arrogant simple man the only way to go forward is to leave the only way to be happy but ill be fine once that iv gone on be fine when coping with the real issues fine when im happier in a different place happier than id of been happier than i could of been but i'll be fine once im happy then when i leave through the door i know itll be tough i know i'll be ok i know id of made the right choice and decision and then we'll see what happens the future is there unlike before the future isnt clear but not a bleak future as before and once iv left through that door we'll see then we'll see if im happy got loads more let me know what u think   | |
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I like "Questions"..interesting. You put the reader in the poet's shoes. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to those words as well. [Edited 10/4/08 11:39am] | |
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2elijah said: I like "Questions"..interesting. You put the reader in the poet's shoes. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to those words as well.
[Edited 10/4/08 11:39am] thanks i wrote them to be songs, but havent got very far yet  | |
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