Jimmy Page
Playing his guitar
In
A stadium of
Over
90,000 fans
(Spectators),
Juxtaposing itself
To the flame...
And then out
It goes.
Magenta.

©2008 Eagle Bear

and the waffle cone
of fire cauldron...
aint
so hot no more..
all those sweet fire flames...
are not as bright
no more...
but its only
four years away
no less a wait
than before...
what will the U.K
cook up
for their 2 0 12 score...
Hopefully M people
M People
will paint the cauldron floor
as we light the flames
we sing we dance
we soar.....

dont burn ya wings on the way up.....

Interesting response. Did you happen to catch the structure I used to write this prose?

I did actually....
but i have no real learnings on prose...
My structure
came from a blend of
Donna Summer - MacArthur Park
and the Olympic fire icecream .....



and you also make some interesting music
Saratoga Springs Shuffle makes me
think of A slow train ride around
the country side of India

glad you got that feeling (about the song) - Saratoga Springs is a retreat center in Northern CA, around Ukiah (2.5 hours north of SF) - there is a main lodge that has a big log cabin feel, with tapestries on the wall and a big upstairs porch and everything. I was thinking about that when I wrote the song, and was intent on creating a vibe similar to what you felt, but mixing it in with a congregational choir procession (to the altar)

groovyiau said:

mmm
cant say i got the
feel of log cabins in there...

Those drums your using always take me to India

you'd have to actually visit the lodge in question to feel that part of it. but glad you liked it still...

groovyiau said:

eaglebear4839 said:

You actually did make me think
about what a log cabin would
sound like musically.... still aint
worked it out yet... frontier land stuff....

is it pre or post cowboy era... ?

Danielle Boon...
Davey Crocket...
Sitting bull and moose.... comes to mind....

got any history on log cabin invention.... if you got time...