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new poem unfinished titled inevitable Inevitable
Come into this world alone Sometimes filled with love The circle of life takes over Alone to loved ones to alone We all die alone Inevitable it is we can try as much as we want to avoid it It will come to get you one day Age has no barrier, unfortunately.....thats all i have so far | |
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Beautiful!   | |
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EccentricLady said: Beautiful!
thanks sweetie  | |
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Have you revisited this yet?
finished it? Id be interested to know. walk with crooked shoes www.myspace/syblepurplelishous | |
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syble said: Have you revisited this yet?
finished it? Id be interested to know. no not yet will add more to it when i have more 2 add, nothing atm hun. | |
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Beautiful writing...brilliant!  "Study and show yourself approved"
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FrankAxtell said: Beautiful writing...brilliant!
aw thanks hunny, not done yet but was what i was feeling at the time | |
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missmad said: Inevitable
Come into this world alone Sometimes filled with love The circle of life takes over Alone to loved ones to alone We all die alone Inevitable it is we can try as much as we want to avoid it It will come to get you one day Age has no barrier, unfortunately.....thats all i have so far It's up to of us..... to make sure this dose'nt happen. my phone is heavy | |
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tony23k said: missmad said: Inevitable
Come into this world alone Sometimes filled with love The circle of life takes over Alone to loved ones to alone We all die alone Inevitable it is we can try as much as we want to avoid it It will come to get you one day Age has no barrier, unfortunately.....thats all i have so far It's up to us..... to make sure this dose'nt happen. my phone is heavy | |
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tony23k said: missmad said: Inevitable
Come into this world alone Sometimes filled with love The circle of life takes over Alone to loved ones to alone We all die alone Inevitable it is we can try as much as we want to avoid it It will come to get you one day Age has no barrier, unfortunately.....thats all i have so far It's up to of us..... to make sure this dose'nt happen. not sure how does that work, my belief atm is we all die alone, physically alone. do you mean that our hearts are filled with love thus we are not alone thus do not die alone? | |
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missmad said: tony23k said: It's up to us..... to make sure this dosen't happen. not sure how does that work, my belief atm is we all die alone, physically alone. do you mean that our hearts are filled with love thus we are not alone thus do not die alone? Although it's not always possible,and a lot of people do die alone... When the circumstances permit,alone should not be an option.::::: I love your poems missmad. this line stood out to me, and made me think.  :::::my phone is heavy | |
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tony23k said: missmad said: not sure how does that work, my belief atm is we all die alone, physically alone. do you mean that our hearts are filled with love thus we are not alone thus do not die alone? Although it's not always possible,and a lot of people do die alone... When the circumstances permit,alone should not be an option.::::: I love your poems missmad. this line stood out to me, and made me think. :::::ur right it should not be an option but like u said it does happen thanks sweetheart awwwww, im glad. | |
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missmad said: tony23k said: Although it's not always possible,and a lot of people do die alone... When the circumstances permit,alone should not be an option.::::: I love your poems missmad. this line stood out to me, and made me think. :::::ur right it should not be an option but like u said it does happen thanks sweetheart awwwww, im glad. my phone is heavy | |
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tony23k said: missmad said: ur right it should not be an option but like u said it does happen thanks sweetheart awwwww, im glad. | |
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