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Thread started 04/16/08 2:27am

missmad

untitled poem : still tossing up between new book, love/atrocities of humanity...anyway..

criminals beheaded for the war
bag over your head
the knife you do not see
hands tied behind your backs
murderers await
serum they provide sometimes
make the pain less
groggy becomes you
criminal, for being
world around you becomes dark
do u then see the light?
vultures wait 2 consume you
those moments become hours, hours become years
years become eternity.
loved ones wait with anticipation
are you, have they, what did you say?
their moment of pride has come
with the weapon behind their back
they enter it into eyesight, steps forward they take, lay u on your side
the ritual they begin
do they decide to have more festivities and cut u up into 11 pieces?
lovers, mourn
will this ever go away?
I....
Death by.....
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Reply #1 posted 04/16/08 4:50am

DevinDevin

I like this Missmad.

Patriotism is the virtue of the vicious.
Oscar Wilde
[Edited 4/16/08 4:50am]
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Reply #2 posted 04/16/08 4:56am

missmad

DevinDevin said:

I like this Missmad.

Patriotism is the virtue of the vicious.
Oscar Wilde
[Edited 4/16/08 4:50am]



thanks sweetheart, just to clarify though from the quote u posted, it is not patriotic to any one nation, but 2 use that quote, it is patriotic to these individuals who r murdered
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Reply #3 posted 04/16/08 4:57am

DevinDevin

missmad said:

DevinDevin said:

I like this Missmad.

Patriotism is the virtue of the vicious.
Oscar Wilde
[Edited 4/16/08 4:50am]



thanks sweetheart, just to clarify though from the quote u posted, it is not patriotic to any one nation, but 2 use that quote, it is patriotic to these individuals who r murdered


Oh I know smile .
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Reply #4 posted 04/16/08 5:13am

missmad

DevinDevin said:

missmad said:




thanks sweetheart, just to clarify though from the quote u posted, it is not patriotic to any one nation, but 2 use that quote, it is patriotic to these individuals who r murdered


Oh I know smile .



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Reply #5 posted 04/16/08 8:30am

EccentricLady

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missmad said:

criminals beheaded for the war
bag over your head
the knife you do not see
hands tied behind your backs
murderers await
serum they provide sometimes
make the pain less
groggy becomes you
criminal, for being
world around you becomes dark
do u then see the light?
vultures wait 2 consume you
those moments become hours, hours become years
years become eternity.
loved ones wait with anticipation
are you, have they, what did you say?
their moment of pride has come
with the weapon behind their back
they enter it into eyesight, steps forward they take, lay u on your side
the ritual they begin
do they decide to have more festivities and cut u up into 11 pieces?
lovers, mourn
will this ever go away?
I....
Death by.....

Beautiful! rose
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Reply #6 posted 04/16/08 9:56pm

missmad

EccentricLady said:

missmad said:

criminals beheaded for the war
bag over your head
the knife you do not see
hands tied behind your backs
murderers await
serum they provide sometimes
make the pain less
groggy becomes you
criminal, for being
world around you becomes dark
do u then see the light?
vultures wait 2 consume you
those moments become hours, hours become years
years become eternity.
loved ones wait with anticipation
are you, have they, what did you say?
their moment of pride has come
with the weapon behind their back
they enter it into eyesight, steps forward they take, lay u on your side
the ritual they begin
do they decide to have more festivities and cut u up into 11 pieces?
lovers, mourn
will this ever go away?
I....
Death by.....

Beautiful! rose



thanks honey smile
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Reply #7 posted 04/17/08 7:54am

EccentricLady

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missmad said:

EccentricLady said:


Beautiful! rose



thanks honey smile

Your Welcome! smile
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Reply #8 posted 04/17/08 8:44am

missmad

EccentricLady said:

missmad said:




thanks honey smile

Your Welcome! smile



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