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Thread started 03/30/08 6:46pm

Atirolopiuuk

Sowing Seeds of Doubt

The tiniest of seeds
flourish when tended
even overgrown weeds
their beauty surrendered
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Reply #1 posted 03/30/08 8:02pm

Mach

rose
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Reply #2 posted 03/30/08 8:43pm

FrankAxtell

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Atirolopiuuk said:

The tiniest of seeds
flourish when tended
even overgrown weeds
their beauty surrendered

deep... biggrin
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Reply #3 posted 03/31/08 4:10am

Atirolopiuuk

Many thanks rose
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Reply #4 posted 03/31/08 4:22am

Atirolopiuuk

Has she entranced you so
stolen you from my arms
whispering a sweet word
to you using cunning charms
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Reply #5 posted 03/31/08 4:48am

syble

Is this an ongoing thought?

Is the that the second verse?
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Reply #6 posted 03/31/08 5:07am

Atirolopiuuk

syble said:

Is this an ongoing thought?

Is the that the second verse?

It is an ongoing thought, although separate poems on the same topic, they're about someone who is interfering in another couple's relationship, trying to steal her man. It's not necessarily one poem altogether though.
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Reply #7 posted 03/31/08 5:07am

Atirolopiuuk

The fresh flower
you recently picked
lays by the wayside

withered, lacking power
dust clouds kicked
by passersby in stride
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Reply #8 posted 03/31/08 5:12am

Heiress

Atirolopiuuk said:

The fresh flower
you recently picked
lays by the wayside

withered, lacking power
dust clouds kicked
by passersby in stride


while the faded rose of your past
lies pressed
between the musty pages
of a forgotten book...
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Reply #9 posted 04/01/08 6:48pm

Atirolopiuuk

the blustery ill wind
blowing in from below
spins rage from within
yet dies mid-throes
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Reply #10 posted 04/03/08 5:43am

Mach

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Reply #11 posted 04/04/08 12:29am

Heiress

and from the stirrings of the ashes
rises a phoenix of flame
the tiniest thread of light
whispers hope
to the night...

peace
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