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Take A Look Poem i hope everyone likes my poem
Looking inside myself... what do i see I see a child who cannot dream For the fears that i have, my voice cannot scream. Looking inside myself... what do i see I see a child who cannot wish Because in order for me to make a wish I must have hope. Looking inside myself... what do i see I see a child who cannot laugh Because tears of sadness is the vision of my Reality. Looking inside myself... what do i see I see a child that has no future Because in order to have a future... I must know Love. Looking inside myself... what do i see? Nothing!!! [Edited 3/27/08 22:09pm] [Edited 3/28/08 22:36pm] | |
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Love it and U need 2 do more PEACE.....It does not mean 2 be in a place where there is no noise,trouble,or hardwork.It means 2 be in the midst of those things and still be calm in your heart ! | |
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Never Alone Poem
Within this Ocean, i cleansed by body Feeling the creation fo life that it spawns Feeling the death of souls, that has gone beyond Within this Ocean, i hear the cries of those who are Desperate... Begging me for mercy that i can not give For you see, i too is desperate seeking for a life to live. Standing near the Shores... The sea is so calm The waves of serenity places us at Peace Only those who desires the light knows that this is our home. A home where we shall walk. Never Alone Gladly Poem How do i accept this feeling... That has taken over my body A feeling so strong... i can no longer resist The life inside of me Has become apart of my soul A spirit that gives me Strength and when i am weak The spirit takes control How do i accept this... When wisdom enters my heart And knowledge is pleasant upon my soul The burden's have been lifted My breath has become so light My dreams are now peaceful when i sleep at nite... How can i accept this... This feeling that i have A feeling that i never have experienced while living in the past My vision was so Cloudy... My mind was so lost I prayed everyday... to take the misery away... no matter what the cost How do i accept this feeling i now know of Happiness that was placed upon my shoulders... from the wings of a Dove. Happiness that shines with a bright light. Happiness that makes the visions clear in sight. Happiness that allows me to laugh... and greet those around me with opened arms Happiness that fights the deceptions when the evil ways of others uses their wildly charms How do i accept Happiness? Gladly!!! Come Walk With Me Poem Come walk with me into the Light... Where your vision would be so clear and Bright. Come walk with me and take a look into your past. Living your life... A Life you lived so fast. Now tell me... Was your life worth the turmoil. Come walk with me To show you the Present Sitting all alone once again... Deep inside your thoughts Wondering how you lost their love You so feverishly sought Come walk with me... Take a look inside your Heart. Does it pretend to know your wants. Or does it know the soul that screamed so Loud right from the start Come walk with me into the Dawn Where the spirit of love is upon u Now A place where no sorrow or hate will be allowed Come walk with me... To listen to your soul And as we Listen... your heart will begin to grow Understanding that in order to Love... U must love thy self first... A Love that u shall feel if though It came from the Heavens from above Now come walk with me to our final place This will be a journey u will never forget A walk in here with me... You'll never regret U see this is Euphoria, this is me The Euphoria of the Soul... A place where u too can be Free Allow your mind to search your heart And your heart to search your mind Because your Soul, will experience A feeling like no other kind Now tell me... Do U wish to take a Walk? | |
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Star this is so very talented ! Keep it up and make copies ! PEACE.....It does not mean 2 be in a place where there is no noise,trouble,or hardwork.It means 2 be in the midst of those things and still be calm in your heart ! | |
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not bad | |
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Very nice Ohh purple joy oh purple bliss oh purple rapture! REAL MUSIC by REAL MUSICIANS - Prince "I kind of wish there was a reason for Prince to make the site crash more" ~~ Ben |
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For You
Break through We can always ponder on what has been done but do we ask, did we choose to experience it? I say, yes - we place ourselves in every place we stand - even when we don't realize it. Example: You set your alarm to wake up at a certain point to accomplish what you have scheduled to do w/in your days... You leave to go to your scheduled event, along the way... you get in an accident - that accident is not an accident it is the moment you chose to leave the house and at that very moment to experience another who meets you in the place YOU did not feel you wanted to be but still did so by that choice. Example: You go somewhere, meet somebody and end up in a relationship - your choice Now there are so many variants I could take up the whole server and write a book no free will; howevever, here is a magic key... YOU ARE CREATED with FREE WILL to go thru what you do in experiences and learn from it, embrace it and let it go to become more than you thought you could be with the love you are created with. It is not that you are this or that... it simply is that you are love PERIOD. Key Embrace Love Embrace forgiveness Embrace FREE WILL and You will find you will attract everything that LOVE you already are can grow into what you are TO BECOME. Take care and thank you. QuietSeven | |
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this is nice Star .. can we make requests? like ask you to write a poem about The Ocean? the Mountains? ... | |
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Nice poems, but some sound sad | |
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do they flow like a torrent?
keep writing but sometimes go back with fresh eyes and edit if needed just a thought you have deep feelings and express them well walk with crooked shoes www.myspace/syblepurplelishous | |
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bluestar2006 said: Never Alone Poem
Within this Ocean, i cleansed by body Feeling the creation fo life that it spawns Feeling the death of souls, that has gone beyond Within this Ocean, i hear the cries of those who are Desperate... Begging me for mercy that i can not give For you see, i too is desperate seeking for a life to live. Standing near the Shores... The sea is so calm The waves of serenity places us at Peace Only those who desires the light knows that this is our home. A home where we shall walk. Never Alone my phone is heavy | |
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