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Thread started 03/27/08 10:09pm

bluestar2006

Take A Look Poem

i hope everyone likes my poem

Looking inside myself... what do i see

I see a child who cannot dream

For the fears that i have, my voice cannot scream.

Looking inside myself... what do i see

I see a child who cannot wish

Because in order for me to make a wish

I must have hope.

Looking inside myself... what do i see

I see a child who cannot laugh

Because tears of sadness is the vision of my Reality.

Looking inside myself... what do i see

I see a child that has no future

Because in order to have a future...

I must know Love.

Looking inside myself... what do i see?

Nothing!!!
[Edited 3/27/08 22:09pm]
[Edited 3/28/08 22:36pm]
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Reply #1 posted 03/27/08 10:54pm

IrrisistableRi
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Love it and U need 2 do more rose dove rose
peace PEACE.....It does not mean 2 be in a place where there is no noise,trouble,or hardwork.It means 2 be in the midst of those things and still be calm in your heart ! heart
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Reply #2 posted 03/28/08 9:31am

bluestar2006

Never Alone Poem

Within this Ocean, i cleansed by body

Feeling the creation fo life that it spawns

Feeling the death of souls, that has gone beyond

Within this Ocean, i hear the cries of those who are Desperate...

Begging me for mercy that i can not give

For you see, i too is desperate seeking for a life to live.

Standing near the Shores...

The sea is so calm

The waves of serenity places us at Peace

Only those who desires the light knows that this is our home.

A home where we shall walk.

Never Alone

Gladly Poem
How do i accept this feeling...

That has taken over my body

A feeling so strong... i can no longer resist

The life inside of me

Has become apart of my soul

A spirit that gives me Strength

and when i am weak

The spirit takes control

How do i accept this...

When wisdom enters my heart

And knowledge is pleasant upon my soul

The burden's have been lifted

My breath has become so light

My dreams are now peaceful when i sleep at nite...

How can i accept this...

This feeling that i have

A feeling that i never have experienced while living in the past

My vision was so Cloudy...

My mind was so lost

I prayed everyday... to take the misery away... no matter what the cost

How do i accept this feeling i now know of

Happiness that was placed upon my shoulders... from the wings of a Dove.

Happiness that shines with a bright light.

Happiness that makes the visions clear in sight.

Happiness that allows me to laugh... and greet those around me with opened arms

Happiness that fights the deceptions when the evil ways of others uses their wildly charms

How do i accept Happiness?

Gladly!!!

Come Walk With Me Poem
Come walk with me into the Light...

Where your vision would be so clear and Bright.

Come walk with me and take a look into your past.

Living your life... A Life you lived so fast.

Now tell me... Was your life worth the turmoil.

Come walk with me

To show you the Present

Sitting all alone once again... Deep inside your thoughts

Wondering how you lost their love

You so feverishly sought

Come walk with me... Take a look inside your Heart.

Does it pretend to know your wants.

Or does it know the soul that screamed so

Loud right from the start

Come walk with me into the Dawn

Where the spirit of love is upon u Now

A place where no sorrow or hate will be allowed

Come walk with me... To listen to your soul

And as we Listen... your heart will begin to grow

Understanding that in order to Love...

U must love thy self first...

A Love that u shall feel if though

It came from the Heavens from above

Now come walk with me to our final place

This will be a journey u will never forget

A walk in here with me... You'll never regret

U see this is Euphoria, this is me

The Euphoria of the Soul... A place where u too can be Free

Allow your mind to search your heart

And your heart to search your mind

Because your Soul, will experience

A feeling like no other kind

Now tell me... Do U wish to take a Walk?
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Reply #3 posted 03/28/08 7:38pm

IrrisistableRi
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Star this is so very talented ! Keep it up and make copies ! rose
peace PEACE.....It does not mean 2 be in a place where there is no noise,trouble,or hardwork.It means 2 be in the midst of those things and still be calm in your heart ! heart
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Reply #4 posted 03/28/08 10:30pm

mplsmike

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not bad biggrin
Love Life,
Love God,
And Only Do Drugs You Need
smoker

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Reply #5 posted 03/28/08 10:41pm

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Very nice nod
canada

Ohh purple joy oh purple bliss oh purple rapture!
REAL MUSIC by REAL MUSICIANS - Prince
"I kind of wish there was a reason for Prince to make the site crash more" ~~ Ben
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Reply #6 posted 03/28/08 11:23pm

QuietSeven

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For You

Break through

We can always ponder on what has been done but do we ask, did we choose to experience it? I say, yes - we place ourselves in every place we stand - even when we don't realize it.

Example:

You set your alarm to wake up at a certain point to accomplish what you have scheduled to do w/in your days...

You leave to go to your scheduled event, along the way... you get in an accident - that accident is not an accident it is the moment you chose to leave the house and at that very moment to experience another who meets you in the place YOU did not feel you wanted to be but still did so by that choice.

Example:

You go somewhere, meet somebody and end up in a relationship - your choice


Now there are so many variants I could take up the whole server and write a book no free will; howevever, here is a magic key...

YOU ARE CREATED with FREE WILL to go thru what you do in experiences and learn from it, embrace it and let it go to become more than you thought you could be with the love you are created with.

It is not that you are this or that... it simply is that you are love PERIOD.

Key Embrace Love
Embrace forgiveness
Embrace FREE WILL
and You will find you will attract everything that LOVE you already are can grow into what you are TO BECOME.

Take care and thank you.
QuietSeven
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Reply #7 posted 03/29/08 9:31am

Flowerz

this is nice Star .. can we make requests? like ask you to write a poem about The Ocean? the Mountains? ...
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Reply #8 posted 03/29/08 1:49pm

Mach

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Reply #9 posted 03/29/08 6:10pm

mplsmike

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Nice poems, but some sound sad hug
Love Life,
Love God,
And Only Do Drugs You Need
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Reply #10 posted 03/30/08 10:12am

syble

do they flow like a torrent?


keep writing but sometimes go back with fresh eyes and edit if needed


just a thought


you have deep feelings and express them well
walk with crooked shoes www.myspace/syblepurplelishous
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Reply #11 posted 03/30/08 12:33pm

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bluestar2006 said:

Never Alone Poem

Within this Ocean, i cleansed by body

Feeling the creation fo life that it spawns

Feeling the death of souls, that has gone beyond

Within this Ocean, i hear the cries of those who are Desperate...

Begging me for mercy that i can not give

For you see, i too is desperate seeking for a life to live.

Standing near the Shores...

The sea is so calm

The waves of serenity places us at Peace

Only those who desires the light knows that this is our home.

A home where we shall walk.

Never Alone


sun
my phone is heavy
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