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Thread started 02/26/08 10:03am

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Song: She Stays With Him

This is a song that I wrote about 3 months ago. My first attempt. let me know what you think.

She Stays With Him

    Every Saturday night

    He gets drunk and wants to start a fight

    She stays with him

    He says things that hurt her real bad

    I just sit and watch as she gets sad

    But, she stays with him

    I say "You oughtta leave him, can't you see

    He's made your life a misery

    Why do you stay with him?"

    She says "I love him, maybe he'll change

    I'm too far in to rearrange my life

    So I stay with him."

    I tell her I don't wanna see her get hurt

    All he does is treat her just like dirt

    But she stays with him

    All he wants to do is drink

    I wish she would just stop and think

    But, she stays with him

    I say " You oughtta leave him, can't you see

    He's made your life a misery

    Why do you stay with him?"

    She says "I love him maybe he'll change

    I'm too far in to rearrange my life

    So, I'll stay with him."

    One night he went too far

    Got drunk and tried to drive the car

    She stayed with him.



Written by Steven Stone
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Reply #1 posted 02/26/08 11:38am

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Is this a country song?
It reminds me of a real life situation with an ex, although I'm glad I didn't stay with him, his life ended similarly.
But if you wanted us to visualize, you've succeeded!
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Reply #2 posted 02/26/08 11:46am

thisbediscream

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wildgoldenhoney said:

Is this a country song?
It reminds me of a real life situation with an ex, although I'm glad I didn't stay with him, his life ended similarly.
But if you wanted us to visualize, you've succeeded!


yes, I suppose it is a country song. I just need someone to write them music for it. I have the melody in my head, but lack the skill to put it to paper.
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