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Song: She Stays With Him This is a song that I wrote about 3 months ago. My first attempt. let me know what you think.
She Stays With Him
He gets drunk and wants to start a fight She stays with him He says things that hurt her real bad I just sit and watch as she gets sad But, she stays with him I say "You oughtta leave him, can't you see He's made your life a misery Why do you stay with him?" She says "I love him, maybe he'll change I'm too far in to rearrange my life So I stay with him." I tell her I don't wanna see her get hurt All he does is treat her just like dirt But she stays with him All he wants to do is drink I wish she would just stop and think But, she stays with him I say " You oughtta leave him, can't you see He's made your life a misery Why do you stay with him?" She says "I love him maybe he'll change I'm too far in to rearrange my life So, I'll stay with him." One night he went too far Got drunk and tried to drive the car She stayed with him. Written by Steven Stone _________________________________________
"Dream, if U can, a courtyard... An ocean of violets in bloom... Animals strike curious poses... They feel the heat, the heat between me and U" | |
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Is this a country song?
It reminds me of a real life situation with an ex, although I'm glad I didn't stay with him, his life ended similarly. But if you wanted us to visualize, you've succeeded! | |
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wildgoldenhoney said: Is this a country song?
It reminds me of a real life situation with an ex, although I'm glad I didn't stay with him, his life ended similarly. But if you wanted us to visualize, you've succeeded! yes, I suppose it is a country song. I just need someone to write them music for it. I have the melody in my head, but lack the skill to put it to paper. _________________________________________
"Dream, if U can, a courtyard... An ocean of violets in bloom... Animals strike curious poses... They feel the heat, the heat between me and U" | |
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