Look over here
Don't U fear

I wanted U 2 B ma lady
But u kept actin't like a baby
U say I'm actin' way 2 serious
& I'm a fool at the same time
C'mon girl make up yo mind
Cuz girl U ain't blind

Can't U C I'm freezer burn compared 2 Cool
I ain't like them other fools

U're not even half as cute as U think U R
U say U care about me when U don't by far

U say I'm changed
U say I'm mentally deranged
U say it ain't cool
When I stopped bein' ur fool

U say I need 2 laugh mo
But I don't wanna B numba 5 of tha fo

Stop smilin' at ma friendz
When U can't stand 'em
& U really hate 'em

Some of 'em is black, so what?
Cut me some slack, Y would that B so bad?
Look at ma face
Y u care so much 'bout race?
Don't U try & deny it girl

It's deep how U can B so narrowminded
This disgust girl, I just can't hide it

Look at the moon girl 4 it was made 2 shine
my love 4 U is hard 2 define
but it sho is a waste of time

If I may suggest - you wrote two lyrics that I could easily trace back to Prince lyrics - if you found your own way to say the same things, that'd be chill.

Piercing Eyez
Nuthin' But Lies
They critisize ma every move
Don't they know I can selfsoothe?
Why do they even care?
Say it in ma face if u dare!
They say I'm changed
I say I got ma shit tightly arranged
The one I once was
is buried deep under the grass
R Y'all 2 blind 2 C,
That I just want U 2 let me B?
[Edited 2/22/08 8:04am]