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Thread started 01/23/08 6:33am

paisleypark4

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Jan. poet's corner

Everything is upsetting me
So I'm behaving badly
I strain my straight plain face

My sanity is stable
2 work eye am able
As customers and co-workers talk
My mind tends to walk

My spirit has walked out too
My body's energy left nothing 4 me 2 do
While the world treats me with respect
My soul has set for neglect

The music moves my body
And I want to dance half-hartedly
So while I give u half of me
Leave the rest up to health and disease
Please

-11-06

-Zay Zay
Straight Jacket Funk Affair
Album plays and love for vinyl records.
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Reply #1 posted 01/28/08 4:49am

missmad

wrote this bout 2 weeks ago or so


Soul Mate
Does it exist?
Soul mate?
One person for always?
Or many over time?
An individual to be sexually intimate with or an individual to be loving with despite that?
Different levels of love
Those you let jump in2 the act of intercourse and every1 else
Caruso playing, ma tanto bene sai, she sings
Flames, flicker from the candle
Everywhich way: north, south, west and east
Yearning for someone to steady it, to hold it in it's arms and confess it's love
Love and beauty go hand in hand
2 butterflies
Te voglio bene sai she admits
Love thyself before anyone else
To be loved, then one loves?
Love me before I love the both of us
Love me first b4 I love you?
Passion is the mission impossible it seems
Count to 11, Ill let you go till tomorrow

Copyright 2008 Mihad Ali
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Reply #2 posted 01/28/08 8:40am

paisleypark4

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ooooh..now that was nice


My new bf keep callin me his soul mate cuz we known eachother since 92..but i never believed in it..maybe...
Straight Jacket Funk Affair
Album plays and love for vinyl records.
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Reply #3 posted 01/28/08 2:23pm

missmad

paisleypark4 said:

ooooh..now that was nice


My new bf keep callin me his soul mate cuz we known eachother since 92..but i never believed in it..maybe...



i think ure replying to my poem lol so here my answer


thanks glad u like it
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Reply #4 posted 01/29/08 8:02am

tony23k

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nice poems

cool
my phone is heavy
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Reply #5 posted 01/29/08 12:12pm

missmad

tony23k said:

nice poems

cool



thank u smile
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Reply #6 posted 01/29/08 9:53pm

jubilee

kelly sweet - dream on - we are one

words of reassurance perhaps not meant to be told
still, solace i do take and press more into his grace

his love multiplies and unfolds as i feel my hands he holds
is it real or just a dream, make believe just for me

i want this all to be real and not just serene
like a mountain range admired from afar, never summited

is it true when they say dreams become you
or is it true when they say these lies you make

my eternal fate or just a heartwrenching debate
kelly sweet - dream on - we are one

solace i do take
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Reply #7 posted 01/30/08 11:20am

sirnozedevoido
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For a tail is nothin but a long booty
And this is a tail I win in the end

Hum drum-tweedileedeedum Starchild
The funk u started has gone wild
Rappers have taken over
Your music is the only thing that saved us over

Now that you are on the Mothership
I take an aquaswim and do a dip
4 the boogie is dead in 2008
And I long for an enemy i used to hate
i will never dance
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Reply #8 posted 01/31/08 3:40am

missmad

Here is a new poem that was written yesterday Jan 30 while on the beach

Becoming level with the sea

In all it's glorious beauty

Sitting on the warm sand

Bathing under the Australian Sun

Shoes off, into the cold water I go

This Elegance pen and this pad of paper in my hand

All alone, all eyes on me

Steps taken on the shore

Quicksand melts into my feet

Crashing Waves

Suddenly shells beneath my feet

Walk back to the quicksand and remain

Gentleman walks past, hi I reply

Nods his head and mouths something he does

Splash, splash and I lose my balance

Turn my back to the sand and view the blue/green sea

Who/What creates this beauty?

Waves come and wash it away

Sun fades a bit, lovely day

The peace that comes over me when I am near the water

Never will I forget

Everything disappears, I have to do this constantly

Lady passes me, smiles we exchange

Her energy is a bit more positive

Her smile a bit more honest than mine

© 2008 Mihad Ali

it will be posted on my site as well, the official date of it being perfect will be soon.
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Reply #9 posted 02/03/08 12:34pm

tony23k

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missmad said:

tony23k said:

nice poems

cool



thank u smile

yw,
I just enjoyed that journey on the beach. wink
my phone is heavy
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Reply #10 posted 02/03/08 2:45pm

missmad

tony23k said:

missmad said:




thank u smile

yw,
I just enjoyed that journey on the beach. wink



awwwww, am glad T! smile
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Reply #11 posted 02/05/08 9:01am

fascionatress

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PSYCHIC SEDUCTION


an erotic whisper in ur ear

u turn and no one is near

feelin a breeze that comes from nowhere touchin ur face

u swear u can feel someone touch and flood of emotions that u don't want to

replace

close ur eyes and a lover u don't recognize appears

takin ur mind places u thought u would fear

but yet every ounce of u needs to follow this through

feeling everything until its just u two

thinking to urself this can't possibly be

but yet u feel desire burn inside of u with intensity

a fire that can't be consumed by no other

seeking out ur mysterious lover

imagining and tasting ur lover's lips

ur soul raptures into bliss

seduction is the aim

ur lover has his eyes on only u

there is nothing u can do

tryin to fight is in vain

constantly hearing his name

u look and no one is there

but u sense he is near

by the time u realized what has been done

ur already gone

u've been seduced


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Category: Writing and Poetry


i lay down and i close my eyes

u lie deep within my heart

u know where the very essence of me lies

we should never be apart

i close my eyes and all i see is u

u consume everything i do

to the very soul of me

look at what u done to me its destiny

i give u my everything

i can't escape th power u bring

ur eyes pierce me to my soul

love that is yet to be told

i need u more than the words i speak

i love u more than the very life force that flows from me

u are more than what words could every hope to express

u can have all of me until there is nothing left

i am devestated by the thought of u

all the amazing things u do

yet u are here with me

walkin past the nite into eternity

my life began the moment i met u

tell me what to do

when im lost and can't help but fall in love with u
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Reply #12 posted 02/05/08 4:27pm

missmad

fascionatress said:

PSYCHIC SEDUCTION


an erotic whisper in ur ear

u turn and no one is near

feelin a breeze that comes from nowhere touchin ur face

u swear u can feel someone touch and flood of emotions that u don't want to

replace

close ur eyes and a lover u don't recognize appears

takin ur mind places u thought u would fear

but yet every ounce of u needs to follow this through

feeling everything until its just u two

thinking to urself this can't possibly be

but yet u feel desire burn inside of u with intensity

a fire that can't be consumed by no other

seeking out ur mysterious lover

imagining and tasting ur lover's lips

ur soul raptures into bliss

seduction is the aim

ur lover has his eyes on only u

there is nothing u can do

tryin to fight is in vain

constantly hearing his name

u look and no one is there

but u sense he is near

by the time u realized what has been done

ur already gone

u've been seduced


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untitled
Category: Writing and Poetry


i lay down and i close my eyes

u lie deep within my heart

u know where the very essence of me lies

we should never be apart

i close my eyes and all i see is u

u consume everything i do

to the very soul of me

look at what u done to me its destiny

i give u my everything

i can't escape th power u bring

ur eyes pierce me to my soul

love that is yet to be told

i need u more than the words i speak

i love u more than the very life force that flows from me

u are more than what words could every hope to express

u can have all of me until there is nothing left

i am devestated by the thought of u

all the amazing things u do

yet u are here with me

walkin past the nite into eternity

my life began the moment i met u

tell me what to do

when im lost and can't help but fall in love with u



love them both! very cool!
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Reply #13 posted 02/05/08 6:48pm

FrankAxtell

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missmad said:

wrote this bout 2 weeks ago or so


Soul Mate
Does it exist?
Soul mate?
One person for always?
Or many over time?
An individual to be sexually intimate with or an individual to be loving with despite that?
Different levels of love
Those you let jump in2 the act of intercourse and every1 else
Caruso playing, ma tanto bene sai, she sings
Flames, flicker from the candle
Everywhich way: north, south, west and east
Yearning for someone to steady it, to hold it in it's arms and confess it's love
Love and beauty go hand in hand
2 butterflies
Te voglio bene sai she admits
Love thyself before anyone else
To be loved, then one loves?
Love me before I love the both of us
Love me first b4 I love you?
Passion is the mission impossible it seems
Count to 11, Ill let you go till tomorrow

Copyright 2008 Mihad Ali


wonderful, wonderful writing once again...giovane donna...

Your saucy lyricism always has just the perfect hint of anchovies
blended with excactly the right amount black & green olives ...

the way you top it off with a palm full of capers, for that little extra something ...
Eccellentissimo ...!! biggrin
"Study and show yourself approved"
© 2011 Frank Axtell ®
All Rights Reserved.
http://www.soundclick.com...tent=music

www.frankaxtell.com

www.myspace.com/frankaxtell
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Reply #14 posted 02/10/08 2:32pm

tony23k

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fascionatress said:

PSYCHIC SEDUCTION


an erotic whisper in ur ear

u turn and no one is near

feelin a breeze that comes from nowhere touchin ur face

u swear u can feel someone touch and flood of emotions that u don't want to

replace

close ur eyes and a lover u don't recognize appears

takin ur mind places u thought u would fear

but yet every ounce of u needs to follow this through

feeling everything until its just u two

thinking to urself this can't possibly be

but yet u feel desire burn inside of u with intensity

a fire that can't be consumed by no other

seeking out ur mysterious lover

imagining and tasting ur lover's lips

ur soul raptures into bliss

seduction is the aim

ur lover has his eyes on only u

there is nothing u can do

tryin to fight is in vain

constantly hearing his name

u look and no one is there

but u sense he is near

by the time u realized what has been done

ur already gone

u've been seduced


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untitled
Category: Writing and Poetry


i lay down and i close my eyes

u lie deep within my heart

u know where the very essence of me lies

we should never be apart

i close my eyes and all i see is u

u consume everything i do

to the very soul of me

look at what u done to me its destiny

i give u my everything

i can't escape th power u bring

ur eyes pierce me to my soul

love that is yet to be told

i need u more than the words i speak

i love u more than the very life force that flows from me

u are more than what words could every hope to express

u can have all of me until there is nothing left

i am devestated by the thought of u

all the amazing things u do

yet u are here with me

walkin past the nite into eternity

my life began the moment i met u

tell me what to do

when im lost and can't help but fall in love with u

cool
my phone is heavy
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