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You sat before me implying I was the lesser friend My humble response in silence you could not comprehend While you made righteous accusations my lips were sealed I went to a place beyond your scope lands beyond your fields I was the lesser friend you implied yet you could not spell my name “You are losing a beautiful friend” you cried yet you asked my age again My lips were touched, with silence another world my centre My existence you could not comprehend my world you could not enter I was still there as your friend yet you only spoke of violence While you were filled with tears on leaving I was filled with silence You sat before me implying I was the lesser friend My humble response in silence you could not comprehend . [Edited 12/16/07 10:49am] | |
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My freind who sat silent..... O.K. He's gone. | |
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fstop said: My freind who sat silent..... O.K. He's gone.
fstop...  that leaves us with existence...
Suspense on the edge of a leaf a dew drop Firm under your feet a grain of sand Bending in a river a reed Embracing a tree a sheet of bark Resting on the tip of your tongue a word Fleeting image in your mind a thought Feeling in your gut an emotion The touch on your skin a sensation Existence reaches and touches us in many ways... . | |
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infinity
So I asked.. help me understand "never ending" then added confirm that "forever" exists and again, Why should I hang onto "always"? when tomorrow I'm not really sure of? my phone is heavy | |
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tony23k said: infinity
So I asked.. help me understand "never ending" then added confirm that "forever" exists and again, Why should I hang onto "always"? when tomorrow I'm not really sure of? Forever more, Forever more A man made fairy tale I am a man made concept For ever chasing my tail To know that there is an end Is too disturbing to mankind Infinity keeps us boundless And helps us ignore our time  | |
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and time is too persistant,
so we have this in the mix... "Imagine a steel orb the size of the sun. And every day, at the exact time 2 billion doves tap the orb once,..with their wings. When the orb is worn out.." infinity t my phone is heavy | |
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tony23k said: and time is too persistant,
so we have this in the mix... "Imagine a steel orb the size of the sun. And every day, at the exact time 2 billion doves tap the orb once,..with their wings. When the orb is worn out.." infinity t Then time doth tugs at my dress persistently begging the world impress tis thankful that you are not an orb nor i 2 billion doves for i would have worn you away instead i have you for tomorrow today.. polishing your orb with my much genteel gloves  [Edited 12/17/07 6:06am] | |
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drummingout said: tony23k said: and time is too persistant,
so we have this in the mix... "Imagine a steel orb the size of the sun. And every day, at the exact time 2 billion doves tap the orb once,..with their wings. When the orb is worn out.." infinity t Then time doth tugs at my dress persistently begging the world impress tis thankful that you are not an orb nor i 2 billion doves for i would have worn you away instead i have you for tomorrow today.. polishing your orb with my much genteel gloves
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hit me w/ the funk so i do not sleep
make it rock me, ever so deep hit me w/ the soul so that i may b free shakin' my ass 2 greasy melodies hit me w/ the bass so i may move my waste in time always beholding the rhythm and rhyme | |
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sunset symphony
calming waves you set middle way you set between the sky and the sea reflections on and in the water purity comes to shore calmly,first in small thought together then as one sun high above serenity offering it's own wonders shine brightly world tunnel of pink light ray of hope in our and my worlds all will be fine as suggested by this picture pink is what I love and is what all should love it is love copyright 2007 "mihad ali" my phone is heavy | |
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LaLaLaHeeHeeHee said: hit me w/ the funk so i do not sleep
make it rock me, ever so deep hit me w/ the soul so that i may b free shakin' my ass 2 greasy melodies hit me w/ the bass so i may move my waste in time always beholding the rhythm and rhyme . Funk will wake our slumber from the deep down of under Our soul set free as we move & shake across your sea The bass transcends us from any binds in time As our bodies sway in rhythm and we lose our minds in rhyme . | |
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tony23k said: sunset symphony
calming waves you set middle way you set between the sky and the sea reflections on and in the water purity comes to shore calmly,first in small thought together then as one sun high above serenity offering it's own wonders shine brightly world tunnel of pink light ray of hope in our and my worlds all will be fine as suggested by this picture pink is what I love and is what all should love it is love copyright 2007 "mihad ali" . I dance to your sunset Your waves become the orchestra of my sea I find you in my centre, my sky Your reflection in the water flows toward me What we held pure Washes up on our sands Peaceful images and thoughts Held in the palms of our hands I have these pictures of you In minds eye, surrounded in pink And on its borders it writes 'I love you' in purple ink . | |
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Hazel Christmas
The snow doesn't fall When you're not around I can't hear anything without hearing your sound The Christmas tree lights but it isn't the same When I don't see us Next to the fireplace Christmas can't be black But a time to celebrate But I can't have you back For that it's too late I see a Christmas rose I would've picked for you But I guess it waited too long to bloom Maybe we can go to the movies and cry together | |
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BLACK RIBBON
She watches life through a broken window Rain lashes across her bed She curls up tight, seems to keep the frost out And dreams of something else instead It’s been two weeks since the world fell in And let the weather creep in from outside Now she’s looking forward to the summer’s end To the chill that only death can provide She rolls over, smiles, though it’s bitter-sweet She wears one glove for two hands, two socks on cold feet And though she’s known all along it was over She’ll come back again, to try again As she steps over pieces of broken glass She sees a picture lying cracked by the door She gets a flashback to a family party Knows she’s never had a birthday before So she imagines what it’s like to be the special one The girl who gets to blow the candles out And if she could just get it just once her way She’d be in heaven already no doubt She’d wear a black ribbon in her hair She’d have a hiding place under the stair And though she’d known all along it was over She’d come back again, to try again To try again Come back again To try again Come back again | |
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andersongs said: BLACK RIBBON
She watches life through a broken window Rain lashes across her bed She curls up tight, seems to keep the frost out And dreams of something else instead It’s been two weeks since the world fell in And let the weather creep in from outside Now she’s looking forward to the summer’s end To the chill that only death can provide She rolls over, smiles, though it’s bitter-sweet She wears one glove for two hands, two socks on cold feet And though she’s known all along it was over She’ll come back again, to try again As she steps over pieces of broken glass She sees a picture lying cracked by the door She gets a flashback to a family party Knows she’s never had a birthday before So she imagines what it’s like to be the special one The girl who gets to blow the candles out And if she could just get it just once her way She’d be in heaven already no doubt She’d wear a black ribbon in her hair She’d have a hiding place under the stair And though she’d known all along it was over She’d come back again, to try again To try again Come back again To try again Come back again Her version 
The broken window watches me Through fragments of the past The cracks invite the rain My mind someplace else I cast 2 weeks ago it got very cold I’m begging the mocking summer end And if winter should take hold Maybe I could try again, again Out of bed and onto the floor Glass cracks beneath my feet I’ve never celebrated me before Broken glass, picture frames, family images of defeat If only there was something for me I’d wear a black ribbon in my hair Into the heavens I could see Grant myself a hiding place under the stair Though I’ve known all along it was over I will return again Better than reality… sober Hence I will come back, return again, again . | |
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drummingout said: andersongs said: BLACK RIBBON
She watches life through a broken window Rain lashes across her bed She curls up tight, seems to keep the frost out And dreams of something else instead It’s been two weeks since the world fell in And let the weather creep in from outside Now she’s looking forward to the summer’s end To the chill that only death can provide She rolls over, smiles, though it’s bitter-sweet She wears one glove for two hands, two socks on cold feet And though she’s known all along it was over She’ll come back again, to try again As she steps over pieces of broken glass She sees a picture lying cracked by the door She gets a flashback to a family party Knows she’s never had a birthday before So she imagines what it’s like to be the special one The girl who gets to blow the candles out And if she could just get it just once her way She’d be in heaven already no doubt She’d wear a black ribbon in her hair She’d have a hiding place under the stair And though she’d known all along it was over She’d come back again, to try again To try again Come back again To try again Come back again Her version
The broken window watches me Through fragments of the past The cracks invite the rain My mind someplace else I cast 2 weeks ago it got very cold I’m begging the mocking summer end And if winter should take hold Maybe I could try again, again Out of bed and onto the floor Glass cracks beneath my feet I’ve never celebrated me before Broken glass, picture frames, family images of defeat If only there was something for me I’d wear a black ribbon in my hair Into the heavens I could see Grant myself a hiding place under the stair Though I’ve known all along it was over I will return again Better than reality… sober Hence I will come back, return again, again . Interesting twist on it! | |
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Volitan said: Hazel Christmas
The snow doesn't fall When you're not around I can't hear anything without hearing your sound The Christmas tree lights but it isn't the same When I don't see us Next to the fireplace Christmas can't be black But a time to celebrate But I can't have you back For that it's too late I see a Christmas rose I would've picked for you But I guess it waited too long to bloom Nothing is as beautiful Without you around I hear you in everything Your very, every sound The Christmas tree is pretty But doesn’t light me up like you do The fireplace is not as inviting Without it’s glow on your face, on you Christmas is a time to celebrate yet your loss I feel All is too late And for me this is real I pick you as my Christmas rose For you are my bloom Waiting too long I lost you too soon . . [Edited 12/19/07 8:11am] | |
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Desert Spaces
Verse 1 It has been two years, since our love has gone. From a sorrow that's Been nipping at our heels. A child, a daughter, only five years old and a collision that has rung out through the years Verse 2 Here we are imprisoned, between darkness and belief Alone you suffer Still i wonder what you see Wish you'd place these burdens over me Rest on my shoulders and slowly fade into a dream Hook 1 Behind these eyes lies a stranger now to you, Hundred thousand times I've tried to touch you Couldn't penetrate the walls of your solitude That's been chipping away At this house we made out of love. Verse 3 These demons, they linger Linger in the snow. Stealing the wanderlust that use to fill our hearts. And this burning candle is fading, oh so slow, wish i could bring you through this endless falling that seems so long Hook 2 Behind these eyes lies a stranger now to you. A world of desert spaces, this place is silent like a tomb On the floor the emptiness begins to envelop you And your just withering away in this house we made I'm too strong to stand this too weak to let you stay Beside you, i will lay In this house we made out of love I am a Rail Road, Track Abandoned
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Turn
Burn Learn Yearn 4 the 1 u loved Remember Whenever Together However Not Forever Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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It’s 10.42 and all the lights go out
It’s about the time you start creeping about You got pockets of surprises that’d shock your friends Revenge is in the air, you’re gonna make amends The reasons are blurry and you were out of your face It took 3 guys to get you out of that place You think they said something about your sister One maybe had her number and had possibly kissed her They said to watch your back when you were walking home You’d get a knife in the ribs if you were on your own So you are standing in the street with your closest mate Murder in your eyes you start to contemplate You’re waiting in the dark, for your chance of action So you can get him quickly without any distraction You’ll take him out of the game, clean and smooth You look at your watch it’s about time to move You have the escape planned, the car awaits With it’s massive wheels from the United States You planned this out, it’s worth a risk or two An end to the insults you incessantly pursue Yet something happened that you weren’t expecting You got a bottle to the head when you were least suspecting You fall to the ground and the boots connect The sound of silence you had failed to detect Your world goes black as you hit the concrete You’re being stamped under by hate-filled feet It was on the news, about a brutal beating When you and death came close to meeting No one seemed to care, most smiled with joy They’d all at least once wished harm on this boy Comas aren’t cool, they’ve got no street cred No one envied you drinking your meal through a straw There’s nothing smart about winding up dead Or with 15 pins in your shattered jaw You can’t get alloys for your new wheelchair And you can’t stop messing up your underwear Your sister still sees him cause she hates you too Though you can’t remember anything that you once knew | |
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EmbattledWarrior said: Desert Spaces
Our love slipped through And in it’s place sorrow grew One year in waiting developed into two The very one we lost Her memory we mourn She began in our love She taught us to love and loss we are born Suffering alone We’re bound together see What’s going on for you Does include me I search for you in your eyes I’m reaching for you now Yet you are absent I wish I could contact you somehow This sadness does linger engulfing our hearts Stealing us away Keeping us apart I lay beside you silent entrapped in our tomb emptiness and loss envelopes us yet for you I always have room I lay beside you waiting For us to come through For the love we had and lost Is about me and you You are not alone I’m here Waiting . [Edited 12/21/07 10:10am] | |
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paisleypark4 said: Turn
Burn Learn Yearn 4 the 1 u loved Remember Whenever Together However Not Forever The chapters of us I did turn Though my fingers began to burn With you many things I did learn Yet for this ecstatic love my heart did yearn 4 u the 1 I loved In my skin I still remember Not bound by time nor space, just whenever Like the touch of us together That did not last however It was us, and nothing is, nor is not, forever | |
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andersongs said: It’s 10.42 and all the lights go out
It’s about the time you start creeping about You got pockets of surprises that’d shock your friends Revenge is in the air, you’re gonna make amends The reasons are blurry and you were out of your face It took 3 guys to get you out of that place You think they said something about your sister One maybe had her number and had possibly kissed her They said to watch your back when you were walking home You’d get a knife in the ribs if you were on your own So you are standing in the street with your closest mate Murder in your eyes you start to contemplate You’re waiting in the dark, for your chance of action So you can get him quickly without any distraction You’ll take him out of the game, clean and smooth You look at your watch it’s about time to move You have the escape planned, the car awaits With it’s massive wheels from the United States You planned this out, it’s worth a risk or two An end to the insults you incessantly pursue Yet something happened that you weren’t expecting You got a bottle to the head when you were least suspecting You fall to the ground and the boots connect The sound of silence you had failed to detect Your world goes black as you hit the concrete You’re being stamped under by hate-filled feet It was on the news, about a brutal beating When you and death came close to meeting No one seemed to care, most smiled with joy They’d all at least once wished harm on this boy Comas aren’t cool, they’ve got no street cred No one envied you drinking your meal through a straw There’s nothing smart about winding up dead Or with 15 pins in your shattered jaw You can’t get alloys for your new wheelchair And you can’t stop messing up your underwear Your sister still sees him cause she hates you too Though you can’t remember anything that you once knew The man with a thorn in his side Behind the hatred in his eyes there lies a murderous desire For love | |
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drummingout said: paisleypark4 said: Turn
Burn Learn Yearn 4 the 1 u loved Remember Whenever Together However Not Forever The chapters of us I did turn Though my fingers began to burn With you many things I did learn Yet for this ecstatic love my heart did yearn 4 u the 1 I loved In my skin I still remember Not bound by time nor space, just whenever Like the touch of us together That did not last however It was us, and nothing is, nor is not, forever 
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drummingout said: tony23k said: sunset symphony
calming waves you set middle way you set between the sky and the sea reflections on and in the water purity comes to shore calmly,first in small thought together then as one sun high above serenity offering it's own wonders shine brightly world tunnel of pink light ray of hope in our and my worlds all will be fine as suggested by this picture pink is what I love and is what all should love it is love copyright 2007 "mihad ali" . I dance to your sunset Your waves become the orchestra of my sea I find you in my centre, my sky Your reflection in the water flows toward me What we held pure Washes up on our sands Peaceful images and thoughts Held in the palms of our hands I have these pictures of you In minds eye, surrounded in pink And on its borders it writes 'I love you' in purple ink . so beautiful!!!!! | |
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missmad said: drummingout said: . I dance to your sunset Your waves become the orchestra of my sea I find you in my centre, my sky Your reflection in the water flows toward me What we held pure Washes up on our sands Peaceful images and thoughts Held in the palms of our hands I have these pictures of you In minds eye, surrounded in pink And on its borders it writes 'I love you' in purple ink . so beautiful!!!!! Thank You missmad... It's great playing with other peoples material... my way of really connecting with other peoples work... | |
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drummingout said: tony23k said: sunset symphony
calming waves you set middle way you set between the sky and the sea reflections on and in the water purity comes to shore calmly,first in small thought together then as one sun high above serenity offering it's own wonders shine brightly world tunnel of pink light ray of hope in our and my worlds all will be fine as suggested by this picture pink is what I love and is what all should love it is love copyright 2007 "mihad ali" . I dance to your sunset Your waves become the orchestra of my sea I find you in my centre, my sky Your reflection in the water flows toward me What we held pure Washes up on our sands Peaceful images and thoughts Held in the palms of our hands I have these pictures of you In minds eye, surrounded in pink And on its borders it writes 'I love you' in purple ink . purple & pink my phone is heavy | |
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drummingout said: missmad said: so beautiful!!!!! Thank You missmad... It's great playing with other peoples material... my way of really connecting with other peoples work... ur welcome gorgeous, yes I understand completely, It is fun, I love it myself with other people's creation whether it be poetry or music, looove it. | |
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tony23k said: drummingout said: I dance to your sunset Your waves the orchestra of my sea you in my centre, my sky Your reflection in the water flows toward me I have these pictures of you In minds eye, surrounded in pink And on its borders it writes 'I love you' in purple ink purple & pink 
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drummingout said: tony23k said: purple & pink
Nice usage of a purple filter I am a Rail Road, Track Abandoned
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