A bluefish, swept in by the tide
Cast in2 this stormy sea
A world where love and hate collide
And what will b will never b

Faithful heroes 2 the left of me
Wicked betrayers on the right
Will I find my true destiny?
Will I make it home 2night?

I try 2 take my name back
I try 2 make a stand
I don’t live by a CONtract
I heed the Master Plan

They’ve taken arms against me
They’ve said I wasn’t cool
But if they claim 2 love me
Y do they break the rules?

What’s in a picture, what getcha ?
Betcha thinkin’ ‘bout all the times he sang 2 u
Doing what he came 2 do
And now it doesn’t mean a thang 2 u
Shame 2 u

Stop all the action-reaction faction satisfaction
That spreads hating, wating, commiserating
4 peace 2 come about, SHOUT, hear what I’m preachin’ ‘bout
Love is the way, and that’s all I have 2 say about that!
Just relax and lemme know where my people’s at.

.elbiB eht daeR…evoL si doG

No respones, reactions, anything? wrote this poem 2 create conversation. Where is everyone? Holla back, PFU!

I like it but if you're trying to get a reaction, I said my peace over on this thread. http://prince.org/msg/15/254034

As far as this poem goes...

While I respect your craft with words, the sentiment seems a little dramatic in the face of reality. Life has gray areas and things are not always as black and white.
[Edited 12/3/07 17:20pm]

Slave2daGroove said:

like this thread: Constructive critical discussion with NO blind hatred.



thank u 4 ur feedback. This poem is meant 2 b a response 2 the more radical contingent of PFU: Those that refuse 2 communicate by any other means than spewing hatred and negativity all over the forums. Their dramatic sentiments don't allow 4 gray areas...y should mine?

.etah eht potS...grO eht eerF
[Edited 12/4/07 16:07pm]