Check it out and let me know what you think. Beau made me want to finish this version.

http://www.icompositions....?sid=75283

Best acoustic version of this song EVER!!

Very cool tune my friend. I could possibly hear drums and a bassline after the first verse. Either way, the acoustic version sounds great in it's own right.

That is a sweet ballad. "I dont need your sympathy to lay on top of me"

Your music has definitley picked a much more professional sound through the years and it is good 2 hear your growth and you find your real sound.

paisleypark4 said:

Thanks, man!

artist08 said:

been waitin 4 u

Look Beau!! Nasty, nasty mf!

artist08 said:

Wow dawg. This is really nice. Very sweet. I really like the subtle backing vocals - not on level with the lead but really supporting them in a damn fine way.

I will say that it gets redundant by the second chorus. And I'm really digging to find a flaw because this is really good. Maybe either drop out one of the guitars on the first verse/chorus, or change the pattern of one of them on the second verse.

Just a thought. But me, I haven't written anything new in decades so I know jack.