I've got two new ones, but they're imperfect, so I'll post them for some advice once I get them to a presentable level.

EDIT: One's called "Lemonade" and one's called "Crystalline Wine".
[Edited 11/20/07 2:23am]

Sunset

As the sun nears the horizon
I know it won't be long
until it's all gone.
If there's a tomorrow
you will find me there.

While The Earth Sleeps

I woke up this evening
To find the keys to the kingdom of time
inhaled the last breath of summer
I smiled sweetly at the autumn sky
Colors changing from green to gold
spinning like the folds of her hair
wandered into a glade of heaven
Walking still with out a prayer

That blue star shining in the distance
Was once were we would be
two bodies, An edifying fire
Burning for eternity
If we could be two wayward lovers
like the oceans moon and deserts sun
these aging scars stained on my soul
would fade into oblivion

Under the shade of a willow tree
lay a thousand untouched memories
waiting to be rattled and unfolded
Waiting to envelop me
There plays the line of a melody
of a wishing box against the tree
Whittled out of hearts from the river bed
Where you belonged to me

A lavender avalanche begins to flood
From the sky's wound up above
soaking up her mouth's taste
To rain the petals of her love
This glade of heaven dark and deep
Holding promises i couldn't keep
Still, Love, you can shut your eyes
I'll watch over you while the earth sleeps
(still not done toying with the rhyme scheme and syllable structure)

Here they are. They're both meant to be songs, so just keep that in mind....for Lemonade, it's not really complete. I was gonna post last verse of it, but it just sounded way too corny. Crystalline Wine is rushed, and it shows I think. Yes it's short. Some parts may be corny, or whatever, but let me know what you think anyways.....

Lemonade

You and me babe
You know it's meant to be
I see you looking at me
With your beggin' plea

You gotta lay back girl
You know you gotta relax
'Cause I'll make you feel good
Send shivers down you back

Yes, I like that skirt
I think it needs to come off
Babe you know I wanna do it
My moves can make you go soft

Little girl, you know you want it
Now let me do it to you
You skin's like velvet baby
You don't know what's in store for you

Crystalline Wine

Sit back and open you mind
Gonna take you on a journey of a mental kind

Let Me dim the light a little more
Tonite I'm not interested in a score

Tonite I'm gonna send shivers down your spine
Just you, me, and a glass of Crystalline Wine

You don't need to lay down on the bed
The best kind of foreplay is in your head

I'm working on another one called "Glam Pussy," but it's far from being finished...but I'll post it when I don't think it sucks

bump, for keeping the thread alive