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Thread started 07/15/07 3:08pm

shayne07

Nebulous by shayne

Nebulous 15/7/07

I ve been low down and down low
Never one to go with the flow
Conflict is what i relate with
Never feeling i have anything to give

Seemingly in it for what i can gain
This confusion keeps me lame
Unaware of what is my intention
Unable to vision my direction

I m at the mercy of the unknown
This knowledge i often bemoan
Unsure of what to take responsibility for
A consequence of a nebulous core

All i do is exist
With alone i have made this tryst
Forever wanting a state of grace
Desperate as i am to find my place

I ask myself questions each and every day
Is this a game with myself i play
Will i ever find my resolution
Being blessed with irrefutable solution
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Reply #1 posted 07/21/07 6:46pm

LittleLostStar

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i like your lyrics, but you could post them together and not waste thread space
I'm cute, and I don't care who knows it, I got a job to do.
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Reply #2 posted 07/21/07 7:07pm

shayne07

lol k ... i just put them on as i write them as i get all excited !! cheers 4 comment
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Reply #3 posted 07/22/07 9:29am

tony23k

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Your poems are really powerful alone...



It would be interesting to see them all together,in a constant flow.





keep on cool
my phone is heavy
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Reply #4 posted 07/22/07 12:37pm

shayne07

Thank you 4 your comment , as they re linked i d like to select about 10 that relate n perform them in a constant flow , its something i m trying to make happen ...thanks again 4 taking the time 2 read them and comment .. have a good 1 my friend
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