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Nebulous by shayne Nebulous 15/7/07
I ve been low down and down low Never one to go with the flow Conflict is what i relate with Never feeling i have anything to give Seemingly in it for what i can gain This confusion keeps me lame Unaware of what is my intention Unable to vision my direction I m at the mercy of the unknown This knowledge i often bemoan Unsure of what to take responsibility for A consequence of a nebulous core All i do is exist With alone i have made this tryst Forever wanting a state of grace Desperate as i am to find my place I ask myself questions each and every day Is this a game with myself i play Will i ever find my resolution Being blessed with irrefutable solution | |
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i like your lyrics, but you could post them together and not waste thread space I'm cute, and I don't care who knows it, I got a job to do. | |
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lol k ... i just put them on as i write them as i get all excited !! cheers 4 comment | |
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Your poems are really powerful alone...
It would be interesting to see them all together,in a constant flow. keep on my phone is heavy | |
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Thank you 4 your comment , as they re linked i d like to select about 10 that relate n perform them in a constant flow , its something i m trying to make happen ...thanks again 4 taking the time 2 read them and comment .. have a good 1 my friend | |
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