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Thread started 08/12/07 3:32pm

EmbattledWarri
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Midnight and a Glass of Wine

I very seldomly write poetry, but this one came to me during midnight.
It's free verse, no scheme, something new i never tried.
It's misleading, it looks romantic,but its not

Midnight and a Glass of Wine

1.
Dress your lips with the light of the moon,
and come away with me.
Let the world behind us become panoramic,
as I dissolve into a haze from this glass of wine.
My head on your lap, engulfed by sweet jasmine.
Pursuing a thousand midnights in this half lit universe.
Forever dancing in the currents of your sweet fruition.
Becoming an apprentice in your game of love.
My sage, My guide, My Bodhisattva,
Full embodiment of earth, My nurturer, My lover.

2.
Take me to paris, To café Seul l'Ame.
Whisper in my ear, as i tune up my Guitar.
Be the muse to a melody, Give me the courage to sing.
When the crowds clear, and my last note is played,
will you let me lay on you as we are here tonight.
Contemplating the next millennia together,
Or must i drag this memory from across the sea.
Cull this recondite phantom and shed its cuffs.
In this midnight hour, with this glass of wine.
I am a Rail Road, Track Abandoned
With the Sunset forgetting, i ever Happened
http://www.myspace.com/stolenmorning
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Reply #1 posted 08/12/07 8:57pm

Girdle

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EmbattledWarrior said:

I very seldomly write poetry, but this one came to me during midnight.
It's free verse, no scheme, something new i never tried.
It's misleading, it looks romantic,but its not

Midnight and a Glass of Wine

1.
Dress your lips with the light of the moon,
and come away with me.
Let the world behind us become panoramic,
as I dissolve into a haze from this glass of wine.
My head on your lap, engulfed by sweet jasmine.
Pursuing a thousand midnights in this half lit universe.
Forever dancing in the currents of your sweet fruition.
Becoming an apprentice in your game of love.
My sage, My guide, My Bodhisattva,
Full embodiment of earth, My nurturer, My lover.

2.
Take me to paris, To café Seul l'Ame.
Whisper in my ear, as i tune up my Guitar.
Be the muse to a melody, Give me the courage to sing.
When the crowds clear, and my last note is played,
will you let me lay on you as we are here tonight.
Contemplating the next millennia together,
Or must i drag this memory from across the sea.
Cull this recondite phantom and shed its cuffs.
In this midnight hour, with this glass of wine.
If it's not romantic, what is it?
Is it a love song to wine?
That can be kind of romantic...for the wine...
until you can't make ends meet.
I am not my Girdle.
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Reply #2 posted 08/13/07 5:43pm

EmbattledWarri
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Girdle said:

EmbattledWarrior said:

I very seldomly write poetry, but this one came to me during midnight.
It's free verse, no scheme, something new i never tried.
It's misleading, it looks romantic,but its not

Midnight and a Glass of Wine

1.
Dress your lips with the light of the moon,
and come away with me.
Let the world behind us become panoramic,
as I dissolve into a haze from this glass of wine.
My head on your lap, engulfed by sweet jasmine.
Pursuing a thousand midnights in this half lit universe.
Forever dancing in the currents of your sweet fruition.
Becoming an apprentice in your game of love.
My sage, My guide, My Bodhisattva,
Full embodiment of earth, My nurturer, My lover.

2.
Take me to paris, To café Seul l'Ame.
Whisper in my ear, as i tune up my Guitar.
Be the muse to a melody, Give me the courage to sing.
When the crowds clear, and my last note is played,
will you let me lay on you as we are here tonight.
Contemplating the next millennia together,
Or must i drag this memory from across the sea.
Cull this recondite phantom and shed its cuffs.
In this midnight hour, with this glass of wine.
If it's not romantic, what is it?
Is it a love song to wine?
That can be kind of romantic...for the wine...
until you can't make ends meet.


Laat three lines
I am a Rail Road, Track Abandoned
With the Sunset forgetting, i ever Happened
http://www.myspace.com/stolenmorning
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Reply #3 posted 08/13/07 6:12pm

obsessed

Actually, if you hadn't explained that it wasn't romantic,
I would have taken it as such.....

However, now I do see "ode to the wine" very definitely....
still romantic in it's own way.

Nice poetry btw....very nice.
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Reply #4 posted 08/13/07 6:18pm

Girdle

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EmbattledWarrior said:

Girdle said:

If it's not romantic, what is it?
Is it a love song to wine?
That can be kind of romantic...for the wine...
until you can't make ends meet.


Laat three lines
Why don't you cull those instead? I'd rather hear what happens with the phantom.

How to Love a Phantom...in Three Easy Steps.
I am not my Girdle.
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