She 23/5/07

She is smitten with me
With me she feels free
With me its her comfort to play
She feels its always going to be this way

Secure and safe when i'm in her vision
Knowing i'll never let her suffer derision
She is happy unable to be serious
Inside she's truly feeling delirious

Wearing a smile upon her face
Warm inside imagining our embrace
She says Shayne - i like you
So aware that i like her to

So many things she is prepared to say
So much of herself she'll give away
She feels she wants to be mine
And with me that's just fine

With her believing this will last
No longer directed by a misjudged past
Her giving me a Soul so sweet
To be together is to be complete

she sounds a bit like this....

http://www.youtube.com/wa...5VvvVxuKko

Kids today are just WOW.....

your sounding happy.....

Sounds like you're getting to know and understand
each other better...very cool.

Its written from a moment and with a singular spirit , its not enduring..

go listen to carla R... take your mind off your mind man...





[Edited 5/25/07 14:21pm]

''take your mind off your mind'' is a great line i'm gonna use

easy to use... just stare at wall til your not there staring at a wall.....
most people call it daydreaming....

I ll stare at a wall
Until i'm not staring at all
Taking my mind from my mind
Lost in fantasy i'll find

I ll stare at a wall
Until i'm not staring at all
Taking my mind from my mind
Lost in fantasy i'll find
myself i awake
i turn and return
and wonder where i've been
beyond the wall
what brings me here
adventure escape quiet space
the call of the wall
a mirror a maze



I love Dr Zuess

nice lines

i also like babbaling brookes.....
and forresty ridges,,,,,
http://www.youtube.com/wa...FXCBcLSPMw

nice imagery.....