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Thread started 05/05/07 9:36am

shayne07

What Do U Choose by shayne

What Do You Choose 5/5/07

Because i dont believe in your reality
I know you will want to belittle me
And its pointless me trying to explain
After sunshine we always need rain

My motivation is to defend myself not attack you
In this world it makes me one of the few
So call me detached and conceited
But with belief i 'll never be defeated

I can stand tall and feeling proud
Knowing with courage i speak aloud
I 'll talk of poetry and of love
Taking time to contemplate what's above

But dont confuse this with being weak
I'm a man undeterred in what i seek
Dare you open your mind and heart
To realise we are all at the start

These words i put into the world inspired by you
Always remembering we exist between the two
The inverse of what we think of what we feel
That with our choices its fate we seal
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Reply #1 posted 05/05/07 9:38pm

obsessed

I really have to say this.....you're good with the poetry...I had
a youtube I was going to post earlier, but had to leave in a hurry
and now I can't find it....it kind of alluded to the set-up you have
with this girlfriend of yours.

It's tough, but it will get better I promise you....
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Reply #2 posted 05/06/07 1:26am

shayne07

obsessed said:

I really have to say this.....you're good with the poetry...I had
a youtube I was going to post earlier, but had to leave in a hurry
and now I can't find it....it kind of alluded to the set-up you have
with this girlfriend of yours.

It's tough, but it will get better I promise you....



Thankyou for your compliment...i have been writing for six months so i hope to develope... yesterday i was told that one of my poems is going to be used in a book , so i'm well chuffed , its my first published work...
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Reply #3 posted 05/06/07 6:49am

groovyiau

this is perplexingly interesting....
i never looked at the word "inspired"
from this sort of angle....

funny..... mmmm
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Reply #4 posted 05/06/07 11:24pm

obsessed

shayne07 said:


Thankyou for your compliment...i have been writing for six months so i hope to develope... yesterday i was told that one of my poems is going to be used in a book , so i'm well chuffed , its my first published work...


Kudos to you..... cool

Can you share which poem, or is that taboo now that it's published?
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Reply #5 posted 05/07/07 12:05pm

shayne07

'Taking Flight' is the title of the poem , the book it will appear in will be named 'Tranquil Moments'...Have a good 1
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